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These days thera are a lot Tv channels available to view. Some people think it is good to have a range of options, but others argue that it affects the quality of programs. Discuss both sites and give your own opinion.

These days thera are a lot Tv channels available to view. Some people think it is good to have a range of options, but others argue that it affects the quality of programs. Pg58g
As we live in modern world, there has been a dramatic extension in the number of Tv channels. Some people believe that having a range of options is good while others are arguing as it damages the quality of programmes. One the one hand, how it is entertaining to be various shows on tv when people are extremely bored as it helps one to avoid boredom, just turning the tv on, and choose your favourite one out of programs which are varied. Broadcastings can not only help you to get rid of tedium, but also enriches outlook as it gives lots of opportunities to learn the world, new areas where you have never been without any moving. We can thus be led to conclude that Tv channels would improved if quality not their amount were focused on
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turning the
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one out of programs which
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IELTS essay These days thera are a lot Tv channels available to view. Some people think it is good to have a range of options, but others argue that it affects the quality of programs.

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