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These days, private organizations are sponpsering a numerous investigations.

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These days, private organizations are sponpsering a numerous investigations. These investments either may cause some benefits or may couse some drawbacks. They belive it better to investigates on another projects. On one hand, companies’ investments will make huge breakthrough achievements that helps to researches perform in the better way. One of the major key factor is increase the speed procede of these processes and accomplish in best way. By sponsering, researchers be able to spend more money and therefore purchase more equipments to perform their researches. For example more examinations can be done and it can assist the progress of reseaches. Likewise they be able to formation huge group and use a number of experts to devlope and expand rapidly. On the other hand, these researches have various disadvantages. One of the major one is spending a normous amount of money actually are the waseting. By spending these money, a many of social problems can be solved. For instance, If use investments in growing facilities in cities, it will cause decrease the mass unemployments. Secondly, many of these projects might be fail and oll of investments are being wasted. Beacuse many researches have not any usefull consequences for many peoples. For example, space researches has not benefites for ordinary people. In conclution, many of these private organizations are helping researches by sponsering and helps to these to perform faster and in better way although it is better to spend money on many usefull projects instead of wasting money on rhese types of investigations.
These days, private organizations are
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sponpsering
a numerous
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investigations
. These
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investments
either may cause
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some
benefits or may
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couse
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some
drawbacks.
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They belive
it
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better
to
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investigates
on another projects.

On one hand,
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companies
’
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investments
will
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make
huge breakthrough achievements that
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helps
to
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researches
perform in the
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better
way. One of the major key factor is increase the speed
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procede
of these processes and accomplish
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in best
way. By
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sponsering
, researchers be able to spend more
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money
and
therefore
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purchase
more equipments to perform their
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researches
.
For example
more examinations can
be done
and it can assist the progress of
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reseaches
.
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Likewise
they be able to formation huge group and
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use
a number of experts to
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devlope
and expand
rapidly
.

On the other hand
, these
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researches
have various disadvantages. One of the major one is spending a
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normous
amount of
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money
actually are the
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waseting
. By spending these
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money
, a
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many
of social problems can
be solved
.
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, If
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use
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investments
in growing facilities in cities, it will cause decrease the mass
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unemployments
.
Secondly
,
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many
of these projects might be fail and
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oll
of
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investments
are
being wasted
.
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many
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researches
have not any
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usefull
consequences for
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many
peoples.
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, space
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researches
has not
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benefites
for ordinary
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people
.

In
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conclution
,
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many
of these private organizations are helping
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researches
by
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sponsering
and
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helps
to these to perform faster and in
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better
way although it is
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better
to spend
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money
on
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many
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usefull
projects
instead
of wasting
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money
on
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rhese
types of investigations.
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IELTS essay These days, private organizations are sponpsering a numerous investigations.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
253 words
6.0
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