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English government stopping human rights in europe

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The Human Rights Act is like serious injury insurance, or perhaps an action plan for a global pandemic: you hope you never need it. The problem is that you might do, and it seems this horrific past year has reminded people in the UK that it’s wise to foresee potential trouble ahead. In new polling we at Amnesty commissioned this week, more than two-thirds (68%) of people thought it was important to have a safety net to hold the government to account when things go wrong, while more than half (53%) believed the coronavirus pandemic had illustrated the importance of human rights protections. The government’s appalling handling of Covid in care homes, including the horror of the blanket imposition of do-not-resuscitate orders without proper process, has really brought home to people that you never know when you might find yourself or your loved ones in an unexpected position of vulnerability. So much of the past year was seemingly unthinkable until it happened, and it has demonstrated the fragility of our way of life without guarantees and protections when we are failed. That knowledge is significant, as today (3 March) is the final day of submissions to the government-appointed panel conducting a controversial review of the Human Rights Act. With the events of the pandemic reinforcing the importance of basic human rights protections in people’s minds, it’s extremely worrying that the government is apparently still hell-bent on tinkering with or diluting this vital piece of legislation.
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Act is like serious injury insurance, or perhaps an action plan for a global pandemic: you hope you never need it.

The problem is that you might do, and it seems this horrific past year has reminded
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people
in the UK that it’s wise to foresee potential trouble ahead. In new polling we at Amnesty commissioned this week, more than two-thirds (68%) of
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, while more than half (53%) believed the coronavirus pandemic had illustrated the importance of
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protections.

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’s appalling handling of
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today
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-appointed panel conducting a controversial review of the
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Act. With the
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events
of the pandemic reinforcing the importance of basic
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protections in
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IELTS essay English government stopping human rights in europe

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
245 words
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