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These days more and more countries have become poor according to several worthy reasons such as wars and other seriously terroristic activities this issues considered by some people that poor countries have to help to poor ones.

These days more and more countries have become poor according to several worthy reasons such as wars and other seriously terroristic activities this issues considered by some people that poor countries have to help to poor ones. J0P8w
These days more and more countries have become poor according to several worthy reasons such as wars and other seriously terroristic activities this issues considered by some people that poor countries have to help to poor ones. While some argue that should be that responsibility of government. As per my perspective, fulfilled nations should supply to financially weak countries by moral side. On the one hand it is fundamental to lend a hand to poor countries by money as far sa thay can afford eat food and pay thear education system. By that thay able to create a valuable relation between international countries. Such as USA has been provided cash to Suriya and Afghanistan, even if USA knows that currency will not return. By supporting underdeveloped countries the world will be safer and peaceful because some kind of terrorisms and works couse by them the lack of money they tends to commence wars. On the hand, secondly by accessing that kind of undeveloped nations rich one's can create a valuable relationship which enhance their reputation level. If one country is helping other one with basic amenities, import and export will flourish. Another reason is that poor people are a threat to the world peace. If their needs are not fulfilled, they will take to crime. This can lead to activities like terrorism. By rich nations helping to poor countries can make the world safer and smoother to reside in. To conclude, I strongly believe that rich countries should always support poor ones thanks to then through improved international trade relationship with those countries as well as the peaceful environment.
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argue that should be that responsibility of
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government
. As per my perspective, fulfilled nations should supply to
financially
weak
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countries
by moral side. On the one hand it is fundamental to lend a hand to
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poor
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countries
by money as far
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sa thay
can afford
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food and pay
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able to create a valuable relation between international
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. Such
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and Afghanistan, even if USA knows that currency will not return. By supporting underdeveloped
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the world will be safer and peaceful
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On the hand,
secondly
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country
is helping other one with basic amenities, import and export will flourish. Another reason is that
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poor
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people
are a threat to the world peace. If their needs are not fulfilled, they will take to crime. This can lead to activities like terrorism. By rich nations helping to
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poor
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countries
can
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make
the world safer and smoother to reside in.

To conclude
, I
strongly
believe that rich
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countries
should always support
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poor
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ones
thanks to then through
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improved
international trade relationship with those
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countries
as well
as the peaceful environment.
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IELTS essay These days more and more countries have become poor according to several worthy reasons such as wars and other seriously terroristic activities this issues considered by some people that poor countries have to help to poor ones.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
269 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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