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These days, many university courses are offered through the Internet. Some people think that online teaching has more advantages than conventional classroom teaching or lectures, while others claim there are significant disadvantages. Do the benefits of online teaching outweigh its disadvantages? v.1

These days, many university courses are offered through the Internet. Some people think that online teaching has more advantages than conventional classroom teaching or lectures, while others claim there are significant disadvantages. Do the benefits of online teaching outweigh its disadvantages? v. 1
OVER THE YEARS, THE USE OF CONVENTIONAL CLASSROOM TEACHING WAS ONE OF THE COMMONEST MEDIUM USED TO IMPACT OR AND ACQUIRE KNOWLEDGE BY OUR PREDECESSORS. NOWADAYS, HIGHER INSTITUTIONS HAVE RESULTED TO THE USE OF ONLINE LEARNING. IN MY OWN OPINION, I THINK THE CUSTOMARY METHOD OF CLASSROOM TEACHING HAS LESSER ADVANTAGES THAN THE MORDEN WASYS OF LEARNING AS THIS HAS RESULTED TO INTERNET FRUAD POPULARLY KNOWN AS 419 OR YAHOO BOYS WITH PARTICULAR REFERENCE TO NIGERIA. THOUGH THE USE OF INTERNET IS BEEN SAID BY SOME SCHOLARS TO GRAND SPEEDY ACCESS TO READABLE AND RESEACHABLE MATERIALS WHENEVER THEY ARE NEEDED BY THE STUDENT(S), YET IT LEAVES THE USERS WITH A HALF BAKE INFORMATION, IADEAS OR EVEN BOTH ON THE SUBJECT MATTER. SECONDLY, IT ALSO GIVES ROOM FOR INEPTITUDE OR INDOLENCE AS WELL AS ENCOURGE PLAGIARISM AMONG NUMERIOUS USERS. FOR INSTANCE, IN NIGERIA AND ACROSS THE GLOBE MEN OF GREAT HONOUR LIKE PROFESSOR WOLE SHOYINKA WHO AUTHORED “THE LION AND THE JEWEL, THE OPEN SORE OF A CONTINENT” AMONG OTHER BOOKS AND DR. BEN CARSON OF DETROIT, MICHIGAN, U. S WHO SINGLE HANDEDLY WROTE “GIFTED HANDS, THINK BIG, ETC ACHIEVED THESE WORKS BY DEVOTING THEIR TIME TO THOROUGH READING WHICH IS BEING NEGLETED TODAY. FURTHERMORE, FREQUENT USE OF INTERNET FOR LECTURES IS COST EFFECTIVE AS MOST PUPILS OR UNDERGRADUATES MAY NOT BE ABLE TO FUND THEIR ACADEMIC PROCESSES. A RECENT STUDY SHOWS THAT TRADITIONAL OR ORTHODOX STUDENTS WERE MORE INTELLIGENCE WHEN COMPARED TO THEIR COUNTERPART THAT WERE ONLINE GRADUANCE. BE AS IT MAY, THE IMPORTANCE OF TRADITIONAL WAYS OF READING OR TEACHING CAN NOT BE OVER EMPHASIZE AGAINST THE MORDENIZATION OF GLOBALLY CONNECTED NETWORK SYSTEM IN VARIOUS UNIVERSITIES OF THE WORLD.
OVER THE YEARS, THE
USE
OF CONVENTIONAL CLASSROOM TEACHING WAS ONE OF THE COMMONEST MEDIUM
USED
TO IMPACT OR AND ACQUIRE KNOWLEDGE BY OUR PREDECESSORS. NOWADAYS, HIGHER INSTITUTIONS HAVE RESULTED TO THE
USE
OF ONLINE LEARNING. IN MY
OWN
OPINION, I
THINK
THE CUSTOMARY METHOD OF CLASSROOM TEACHING HAS LESSER ADVANTAGES THAN THE
MORDEN
WASYS
OF LEARNING AS THIS HAS RESULTED TO INTERNET
FRUAD
POPULARLY
KNOWN AS 419 OR YAHOO BOYS WITH PARTICULAR REFERENCE TO NIGERIA.

THOUGH THE
USE
OF INTERNET
IS BEEN
SAID BY
SOME
SCHOLARS TO GRAND SPEEDY ACCESS TO READABLE AND
RESEACHABLE
MATERIALS WHENEVER THEY
ARE NEEDED
BY THE STUDENT(S),
YET
IT
LEAVES
THE USERS WITH A HALF BAKE INFORMATION,
IADEAS
OR EVEN BOTH ON THE
SUBJECT MATTER
.
SECONDLY
, IT
ALSO
GIVES ROOM FOR INEPTITUDE OR INDOLENCE
AS WELL
AS
ENCOURGE
PLAGIARISM AMONG
NUMERIOUS
USERS.
FOR INSTANCE
, IN NIGERIA AND ACROSS THE GLOBE
MEN
OF GREAT
HONOUR
LIKE PROFESSOR
WOLE
SHOYINKA
WHO AUTHORED “THE LION AND THE JEWEL, THE OPEN SORE OF A CONTINENT” AMONG OTHER BOOKS AND DR. BEN CARSON OF DETROIT, MICHIGAN, U. S WHO SINGLE
HANDEDLY
WROTE “GIFTED HANDS,
THINK
BIG
, ETC ACHIEVED THESE WORKS BY DEVOTING THEIR TIME TO THOROUGH READING WHICH IS BEING
NEGLETED
TODAY
.

FURTHERMORE
, FREQUENT
USE
OF INTERNET FOR LECTURES
IS COST
EFFECTIVE AS MOST PUPILS OR UNDERGRADUATES MAY NOT BE ABLE TO FUND THEIR ACADEMIC PROCESSES. A RECENT STUDY
SHOWS
THAT TRADITIONAL OR ORTHODOX STUDENTS WERE MORE INTELLIGENCE WHEN COMPARED TO THEIR COUNTERPART THAT WERE ONLINE
GRADUANCE
.

BE AS IT MAY, THE IMPORTANCE OF TRADITIONAL WAYS OF READING OR TEACHING CAN NOT BE OVER EMPHASIZE AGAINST THE
MORDENIZATION
OF GLOBALLY CONNECTED NETWORK SYSTEM IN VARIOUS UNIVERSITIES OF THE WORLD.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Mistakes

IELTS essay These days, many university courses are offered through the Internet. Some people think that online teaching has more advantages than conventional classroom teaching or lectures, while others claim there are significant disadvantages. Do the benefits of online teaching outweigh its disadvantages? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
280 words
6
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