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These days many people prefer to live in a city rather than in the countryside. What do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of living in a city?

These days many people prefer to live in a city rather than in the countryside. What do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of living in a city? G3JV2
Hany individuals powodays would rather live in an urban area than in a rural area. In my opinion, I agree with that because the benefits of living in countryside do not outweigh the variety of Options offered in cities On the: one hand, there are numerous of reason why people prefer live in city than in the countryside, becquise, living in the city, more advantages. Firstly, people who live in a mettopolis have. more opportunities to lears learn and grow. For example, in the city there are many job opportunities for everyone as well as the income level in the betty is higher than in rural area. Another resen reagel is we will people will have several chance to learn about new science and teche technology. Therefore, everyone will have a have a chance to experience the best so it help them develop more. On the other hand, besides aduanages the being in the city has a nuber of disava disadvantages to begin with in the city we will have to live a busy life so people will ens always feel cramped Instead of a life in the countryside there is a more relaxing and peace que feeling besides that we will avoid social evils. For instance, because in the city there are quite reared Quite a lot of people from different regions to the crime pate rate is much higher than in the nurd area as well as people in the countryside bre usuacey gentter and friendlier. Finally, life is cheap, not too expensive like in the city. Puthermore, people don't have to think to much about living sexpenses Ihes condition, there are huge benefits to living in a large city. These advantages are listed abouchove, and they provide further benefits to our lives. If one wished to improve their life ina mojer city where they may advance their job, study and live contrally I with the greatest services.
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Hany
individuals
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powodays
would
rather
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live
in an urban
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area
than in a rural
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area
. In my opinion, I
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agree
with that
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because
the benefits of
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living
in
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countryside
do not outweigh the variety of Options offered in
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cities


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people
prefer
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live
in
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city
than in the
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countryside
,
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becquise
,
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living
in the city, more advantages.
Firstly
,
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people
who
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live
in a
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mettopolis
have.
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more
opportunities to
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lears
learn and grow.
For example
, in the city there are
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many
job opportunities for everyone
as well
as the income level in the
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betty
is higher than in rural
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area
. Another
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resen
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reagel
is we will
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people
will have
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several chance
to learn about new science and
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teche
technology.
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, everyone will
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have a have a
chance to experience the best
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so
it
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help
them develop more.

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,
besides
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aduanages
the being in the city has a
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nuber
of
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disava
disadvantages to
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with in the city we will
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have to
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live
a busy
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life
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so
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people
will ens always feel cramped
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of a
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life
in the
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countryside
there is a more relaxing and peace
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que
feeling
besides
that we will avoid social evils.
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,
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because
in the city there are
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quite reared Quite
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a lot of
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people
from
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different
regions to the crime pate rate is much higher than in the
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nurd
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area
as well
as
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people
in the
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countryside
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bre
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usuacey
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gentter
and friendlier.
Finally
,
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life
is
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cheap
, not too expensive like in the city.
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Puthermore
,
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people
don't
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have to
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think
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to
much about
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living sexpenses


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Ihes
condition, there are huge benefits to
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living
in a large city. These advantages
are listed
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abouchove
, and they provide
further
benefits to our
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lives
. If one wished to
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improve
their
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life
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ina
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mojer
city where they may advance their job, study and
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live
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contrally
I with the greatest services.
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IELTS essay These days many people prefer to live in a city rather than in the countryside. What do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of living in a city?

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