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In life, we were educated at a young age, and depending on each household, the intensity of education that starts at home varies, but the important things is, is to educate the individual at a young age, now that is not wrong in fact it is more advantageous for the child to learn topics like formality, proper conduct, good manners, etc. while he or she is tail young so that he/she can absorb all the things, he/she learned much faster, being given tasks about doing certain things is not an uncommon occurrence in life, form the moment when we were able to do certain things well at a young age, our parents have already asked us to do simple things, like cleaning a mess, or getting something and delivering it to them, the concept of “work” has already been established since then, and as soon as those children grow up, the concept of work will not change, there will always be something that they will be currently doing
In life, we
were educated
at a
young
age, and depending on each household, the intensity of education that
starts
at home varies,
but
the
important
things is, is to educate the individual at a
young
age,
now
that is
not
wrong
in fact it is more advantageous for the child to learn topics like formality, proper conduct,
good
manners, etc. while he or she is tail
young
so
that he/she can absorb all the things, he/she learned much faster, being
given
tasks about doing certain things is not an uncommon occurrence in life, form the moment when we were able to do certain things well at a
young
age, our parents have already asked us to do simple things, like cleaning a mess, or getting something and delivering it to them, the concept of “work” has already
been established
since then, and as
soon
as those children grow up, the concept of work will not
change
, there will always be something that they will be
currently
doing
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IELTS essay should homework be mandatory

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