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These days, it is believed that the natural world has been received little consideration from humans. In this essay, I will illustrate some reasons that people do not pay much attention to environmental issues.

These days, it is believed that the natural world has been received little consideration from humans. In this essay, I will illustrate some reasons that people do not pay much attention to environmental issues. gW2OO
These days, it is believed that the natural world has been received little consideration from humans. In this essay, I will illustrate some reasons that people do not pay much attention to environmental issues. First and foremost, knowledge deficiency leads to a severe lack of understanding that the natural world has been playing a vital role in their lives. In particular, people occasionally have the tendency of neglecting environmental conservation. For instance, at school, biology is thought to be less important than other subjects. Moreover, children just staring at a smartphone or TV screen after their studying will disconnect them from the natural world. Not only that, according to a significant number of people, environmental protection seems to be as not crucial as economic development. As can be seen, without any emergency actions, the more state-of-the-art industry is, the more serious environmental degradation may result. However, a wide range of proper solutions should be urgently tackled this problem. First of all, promoting the human consciousness of environmental preservation appears to be one of the most substantial priorities. For example, children should be intensely taught to protecting mother nature at their school and home as well. And this will be considered as a compulsory part of every single child’s education. Secondly, another solution is improving their atmosphere by incorporating larger green spaces, such as expanding the number of trees on streets. Thirdly, strict laws should be immediately enforced by the government to raise awareness of citizens about their surroundings. Hence, throughout these ways, people absolutely understand nature’s value and live harmoniously with it. In conclusion, although nature is currently supposed not to deserve human’s concern by virtue of the scarcity of knowledge, concrete and instant actions should be acted as soon as possible to prevent catastrophic consequences.
These days, it
is believed
that the natural world has
been received
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
little
consideration from humans. In this essay, I will illustrate
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some
reasons that
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people
do not pay much attention to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environmental
issues.

First
and foremost, knowledge deficiency leads to a severe lack of understanding that the natural world has been playing a vital role in their
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lives
.
In particular
,
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people
occasionally
have the tendency of neglecting
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environmental
conservation.
For instance
, at school, biology is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
to be less
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
than other subjects.
Moreover
, children
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
staring at a smartphone or TV screen after their studying will disconnect them from the natural world. Not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
that, according to a significant number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environmental
protection seems to be as not crucial as economic development. As can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
, without any emergency actions, the more state-of-the-art industry is, the more serious
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environmental
degradation may result.

However
, a wide range of proper solutions should be
urgently
tackled this problem.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, promoting the human consciousness of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environmental
preservation appears to be one of the most substantial priorities.
For example
, children should be
intensely
taught to
Did you mean "protect"?
protecting
mother nature at their school and home
as well
. And this will
be considered
as a compulsory part of every single child’s education.
Secondly
, another solution is improving their atmosphere by incorporating larger green spaces, such as expanding the number of trees on streets.
Thirdly
, strict laws should be immediately enforced by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
to raise awareness of citizens about their surroundings.
Hence
, throughout these ways,
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people
absolutely
understand nature’s value and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
harmoniously
with it.

In conclusion
, although nature is
currently
supposed not to deserve human’s concern by virtue of the scarcity of knowledge, concrete and instant actions should
be acted
as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
prevent
catastrophic consequences.
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IELTS essay These days, it is believed that the natural world has been received little consideration from humans. In this essay, I will illustrate some reasons that people do not pay much attention to environmental issues.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
296 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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