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These days elderly people are no longer looked after by their families and kept in nursing home

These days elderly people are no longer looked after by their families and kept in nursing home G3Edw
Elderly are burden to society and family is however currently the family members are not taking care of their elderly and leave them to stay in nursing homes there are copies advantages such as they get a company of the same ages however there are certain drawbacks to one the one hand there are several benefits of living there file doors lead to the home first there get professional care and help them member as there are highly qualified and belong to the field of Jurassic
Elderly are burden to society and family is
however
currently
the family members are not taking care of their elderly and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
them to stay in nursing homes there are copies advantages such as they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
of the same ages
however
there are certain drawbacks to
Did you mean "on"?
one
the one hand there are several benefits of living there file doors lead to the home
first
there
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
professional care and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
them member as there are
highly
qualified and belong to the field of Jurassic
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IELTS essay These days elderly people are no longer looked after by their families and kept in nursing home

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
85 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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