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“Learn, earn, return - three phases of life.

“Learn, earn, return - three phases of life. BLema
You acquire knowledge to become successful, Become authoritative to help people. ” - John C. Maxwell These 18 words changed my mindset 180 degrees. It has been exactly two years since I got introduced to John Maxwell’s work, and I still remember this first moment at school library. It had an eye-catching title - “How do successful people think”. Of course, dream of becoming successful allured me; moreover, I desired to read an English book, which was hard to get in our town. After I borrowed this, I remember happily coming back to home, and starting to read it by the window. I liked that it was well structured and easily read. I wanted to take maximum from it, and noted everything on my notebook. Honestly, it was something between dull and normal, but it lasted till I reached chapter 10, the last part. “Practice Unselfish Thinking” - that is what it is called. As the title says, there were explained the reasons of why we should stop being selfish, and start caring about others. If to compare two men, the first - ‘getter’, who only takes, and the second - ‘giver’, who shares, the last person is happier. Because, helping people usually brings a GREAT satisfaction. I (and every single one of us) used to experience this from time to time. However, personally, I never paid attention to those consecutive effects of helping, and never deepened into this topic. But thanks to this book, an enlightenment hit my brain. I understood that it is my obligation to make a contribution to the society. Either major, or minor changes, I want to make the world a happier place. Continuing to be selfish - equals status quo, and sadly a disaster for humanity. That’s why I do not want to regret when I look back in an old age, and ask myself “what good did I make for others? ”. But, to meet my goal and, especially, promote greater and widescale good deeds, I need to become rich and influential. For this, hard work and study are my duties!
You acquire knowledge to become successful,

Become authoritative to
help
people
. ”
-
John C. Maxwell

These 18 words
changed
my mindset 180 degrees. It has been exactly two years since I
got
introduced to John Maxwell’s work, and I
still
remember this
first
moment at school library. It had an eye-catching title
-
“How do successful
people
think
”.
Of course
, dream of becoming successful allured me;
moreover
, I desired to read an English book, which was
hard
to
get
in our town. After I borrowed this, I remember
happily
coming back to home, and starting to read it by the window. I liked that it was
well structured
and
easily
read. I wanted to take maximum from it, and noted everything on my notebook.
Honestly
, it was something between dull and normal,
but
it lasted till I reached chapter 10, the last part. “Practice Unselfish Thinking”
-
that is
what it
is called
. As the title says, there were
explained
the reasons of why we should
stop
being selfish, and
start
caring about others. If to compare two
men
, the
first
-
‘getter’, who
only
takes, and the second
-
‘giver’, who shares, the last person is happier.
Because
, helping
people
usually
brings a GREAT satisfaction. I (and every single one of us)
used
to experience this from time to time.
However
,
personally
, I never paid attention to those consecutive effects of helping, and never deepened into this topic.
But
thanks to this book, an enlightenment hit my brain. I understood that it is my obligation to
make
a contribution to the society. Either major, or minor
changes
, I want to
make
the world a happier place. Continuing to be selfish
-
equals status quo, and
sadly
a disaster for humanity. That’s why I do not want to regret when I look back in an
old
age, and ask myself “what
good
did I
make
for others? ”.
But
, to
meet
my goal and,
especially
, promote greater and
widescale
good
deeds, I need to become rich and influential. For this,
hard
work and study are my duties!
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IELTS essay “Learn, earn, return - three phases of life.

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