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These days, Crime more and more do evil acts like rob, steal and so on, specially cuting down the tree and hutting animal species without legal.

These days, Crime more and more do evil acts like rob, steal and so on, specially cuting down the tree and hutting animal species without legal. 1knWq
These days, Crime more and more do evil acts like rob, steal and so on, specially cuting down the tree and hutting animal species without legal. That actions has had extremly negative effect to inviroment. This essay will indicate harmful effects and give a couple of solutions for this problem. Forrest is a shelter of hundred of the animals. Cutting down the tree causes directly many consequences both people life and species living there, and even the inviroment. The crime ussuly cut down the big tree to get wood. That can be a house of some species like squirrel, hedgehog and the big animals like bear, elephant, and so on. The animals will not have the places to live. This actions increased significantly inviromental pollution which is a green lung of people. The atmostphere is hoter than every day while someone cut down the tree because of enormous profit. Illegal hunting is the same. No any country in the worth accept to hunt the animals species. Somone suppose that using precious and rare things is a hight level. Actually, The crimes always kill and take some parts which is deemed nobble in body of them like ivory of the elephant, horn of rihno and so on. This did decreased quantity of them to warned level and event extinct. This can lead to that people can never be seen them. In order to prevent illegal hunting and cutting down the tree passing over limit need element many actions. Government need to propaganda in the social media about negative effects and punish the crimes. And every citizen also need improve the attitude to protect the planet. No buyer no Seller.
These days,
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Crime
more and more do evil acts like rob, steal and
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so
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specially
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cuting
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down
the
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tree
and
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hutting
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animal
species without legal. That actions
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had
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extremly
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negative
effect to
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inviroment
. This essay will indicate harmful effects and give a couple of solutions for this problem.

Forrest is a shelter of hundred of the
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animals
. Cutting
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down
the
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tree
causes
directly
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many
consequences both
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people
life and species living there, and even the
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inviroment
. The
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crime
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ussuly
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cut
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down
the
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big
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tree
to
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get
wood. That can be a
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house
of
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some
species like squirrel, hedgehog and the
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big
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animals
like bear, elephant, and
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on. The
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animals
will not have the places to
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live
.
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actions increased
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inviromental
pollution which is a green lung of
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people
. The
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atmostphere
is
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hoter
than every day while someone
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cut
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down
the
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tree
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of enormous profit.

Illegal hunting is the same.
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No
any country in the worth accept to hunt the
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animals
species.
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Somone
suppose that using precious and rare things is a
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hight
level. Actually, The
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crimes
always kill and take
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some
parts which
is deemed
nobble in body of them like ivory of the elephant, horn of
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rihno
and
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so
on. This did
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decreased
quantity of them to warned level and
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event
extinct. This can lead to that
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people
can never be
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seen
them.

In order to
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prevent
illegal hunting and cutting
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down
the
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tree
passing over limit need element
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many
actions.
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Government
need to propaganda in the social media about
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negative
effects and punish the
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crimes
. And every citizen
also
need
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improve
the attitude to protect the planet. No buyer no Seller.
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IELTS essay These days, Crime more and more do evil acts like rob, steal and so on, specially cuting down the tree and hutting animal species without legal.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
278 words
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