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There is to much noise in many publices in city

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Traffic congestion is the reason for the level of noice in cities. Cars get strck in traffic on the roads and play sound devices. The fac that factories are built in the city and make noise from them is another reason. The small size at the road in the city creates congestion and the noice couses noice. We can find a solution to this problem by widening city roads and preventing congeion. These congested nises distrupt the place of the city's residents and other organizations. In addition, factorie and markets built within the city will also cause noise. The noises coming from the factories and the noises within the market interfere with the work at the surrounding organizations. To reduce this noise, locate factories and markets around the city. To conclude, we need o widen city roads and locate factories around the sity. Otherwise, we will be a big abstocle to the work of residents and organizatios in the city
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within the market interfere with the work at the surrounding organizations. To
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IELTS essay There is to much noise in many publices in city

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
159 words
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