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There is no doubt that these days some people prefer to be self-employed. The question is, it appear people doing self-employed instead of working for others? In this essay I am going to discuss and highlight the disadvantages of being self-employed.

There is no doubt that these days some people prefer to be self-employed. The question is, it appear people doing self-employed instead of working for others? In this essay I am going to discuss and highlight the disadvantages of being self-employed. r1nQn
There is no doubt that these days some people prefer to be self-employed. The question is, it appear people doing self-employed instead of working for others? In this essay I am going to discuss and highlight the disadvantages of being self-employed. In term of the positive side of being independent. The main reason given to support this claim they have priorities in their life. To illustrate, they might work with some company that does not give them a good amount of money and they want to achieve their goals. In other word, instead of westing their life in some job the don not found any benefit form, on the other hand if they have the time for their work and goals so they can achieve whatever they want and whenever. I think it is fair enough and anyone can do it. However, to talk about the disadvantages I can say that firstly, there is no one to support them. In addition, if they get into a trouble there will be no one help them with it. Secondly, there is no one with them in their business. This is because, nobody will make with them a new ideas or programs. Also, it is too risky to do anything on their own. Sometimes it is a west of time and money as a result they might get something good out of it or they might not In conclusion, it is evident that there are a lot of people who believe it is the best way of working on self-employed, the disadvantages of working self-employed, is the lack of money and time must ensure steps are taken to prevent this phenomenon from deteriorating future.
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prefer to be self-employed. The question is, it
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people
doing self-employed
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of working for others? In this essay I am going to discuss and highlight the disadvantages of being self-employed.

In term of the
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positive
side of being independent. The main reason
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given
to support this claim they have priorities in their life. To illustrate, they might work with
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some
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company
that does not give them a
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good
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money and
they want to achieve their goals. In other word,
instead
of westing their life in
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some
job the
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don not
found any benefit form,
on the other hand
if they have the time for their work and goals
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they can achieve whatever they want and whenever. I
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and anyone can do it.

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, if they
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into a trouble there will be no one
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help
them with it.
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, nobody will
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with them a new
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ideas
or programs.
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, it is too risky to do anything on their
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own
.
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Sometimes
it is a west of time and money
as a result
they might
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get
something
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good
out of
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it or
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In conclusion
, it is evident that there are
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a lot of
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people
who believe it is the best way of working on self-employed, the disadvantages of working self-employed, is the lack of money and time
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must
ensure steps
are taken
to
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prevent
this phenomenon from deteriorating future.
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IELTS essay There is no doubt that these days some people prefer to be self-employed. The question is, it appear people doing self-employed instead of working for others? In this essay I am going to discuss and highlight the disadvantages of being self-employed.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
281 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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