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Study a foreign language in your country or in foreign country

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I think that going to live in a foreign country where the language is spoken is the most effective way to learn a foreign language. but, it can also be painful. especially when you don’t have good basic language skills. this way, you won’t understand anything in the beginning. Another thing is that we have to get used to the different cultures and many other difficulties when we are in a foreign place, such as places to stay, making money. The advantage of studying a language abroad is that we have to use the language daily, which improves the speaking skills, and some daily conversation. After the culture shock, we can also bring our culture to the country to let more people know our homeland. Learning a language in a foreign country is effective because of the frequency that we use the language. As a result, if we want to learn a foreign language well, we have to practice a lot and never give up no matter where we are. The more we use the language the better skill we will have. And we should keep practicing, otherwise, we might forget it one day.
I
think
that going to
live
in a
foreign
country where the
language
is spoken
is the most effective way to learn a
foreign
language
.
but
, it can
also
be painful.
especially
when you don’t have
good
basic
language
skills
.
this
way, you won’t understand anything in the beginning. Another thing is that we
have to
get
used
to the
different
cultures and
many
other difficulties when we are in a
foreign
place, such as places to stay, making money.

The advantage of studying a
language
abroad is that we
have to
use
the
language
daily, which
improves
the speaking
skills
, and
some
daily conversation. After the culture shock, we can
also
bring our culture to the country to
let
more
people
know our homeland.

Learning a
language
in a
foreign
country is effective
because
of the frequency that we
use
the
language
.
As a result
, if we want to learn a
foreign
language
well, we
have to
practice a lot and never give up no matter where we are. The more we
use
the
language
the better
skill
we will have. And we should
keep
practicing,
otherwise
, we might forget it one day.
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IELTS essay Study a foreign language in your country or in foreign country

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
194 words
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