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There is no doubt that the Internet is one of the greatest humankind's inventions of the last century.

There is no doubt that the Internet is one of the greatest humankind's inventions of the last century. rdYp
There is no doubt that the Internet is one of the greatest humankind's inventions of the last century. It is fast and easy way to get a lot of valuable information. However, some people believe that the Internet creates many problems. From my point of view I think that the Internet brings us advantages as well as disadvantages. First of all, I think that the Internet brings us many benefits. People can have access to the latest news, weather, traffic, bid-and-asked quotations, etc. Another important benefit is that the Internet is a great means of communication. A few years ago it was rather difficult to imagine that it would be possible to communicate with people from all around the world. Students have the opportunity to speak to the professors from prestigious universities, ask their opinions and extend their range of interests. People have the opportunity to communicate with the people from other countries, find out their customs, traditions and even visit each other. I think that the Internet makes our world smaller and friendlier. We’ve got the chance to learn more about the world's history, our forefathers and gain more knowledge. From the other hand, many questions and difficulties arose with the appearance of the Internet. For example, children got the easy access to the information they are not supposed to read. Also, people's security and privacy are often violated through steeling and gathering information about people and then selling it. Many banks had to increase their Internet security because of hacking. However, I believe that Internet gave us more advantages and opportunities than disadvantages and problems.
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that the Internet brings us
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benefits.
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People
can have access to the latest news, weather, traffic, bid-and-asked quotations, etc. Another
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important
benefit is that the Internet is a great means of communication. A few years ago it was
rather
difficult to imagine that it would be possible to communicate with
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people
from all around the world. Students have the opportunity to speak to the professors from prestigious universities, ask their opinions and extend their range of interests.
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People
have the opportunity to communicate with the
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people
from other countries, find out their customs, traditions and even visit each other. I
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think
that the Internet
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makes
our world smaller and friendlier. We’ve
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the chance to learn more about the world's history, our forefathers and gain more knowledge.

From the other hand,
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questions and difficulties arose with the appearance of the Internet.
For example
, children
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the easy access to the information they are not supposed to read.
Also
,
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people
's security and privacy are
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often
violated through steeling and gathering information about
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people
and then selling it.
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Many
banks had to increase their Internet security
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because
of hacking.

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, I believe that Internet gave us more advantages and opportunities than disadvantages and problems.

IELTS essay There is no doubt that the Internet is one of the greatest humankind's inventions of the last century.

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4 paragraphs
267 words
6.0
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