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There is no doubt that from the down of history most people used to argue

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There is no doubt that from the down of history most people used to argue if it is your gender will give a better chance to be employed, The question, is it faire that what supposed to happen? People believe that the structural of females and males are different also to take this in consideration it has been known about men the strength so, this a significant reason for him to be a plumber or deal with electricity, in spite of that no one of them decide his own gender in that case we ought to hire based on who is qualified. furthermore, being talented also, it takes a huge requirement additionally, it is a bonus in your career, nowadays the deference between men and women it is fiddling, on the contrary from what it used to be which is male did not use to cook it is women`s job. also women supposed to not to war cause it is his issue. In conclusion, having various opinions in this them it will be overmore of we did not develop our midset and give the proffision who deserve it, not on something it has no choice with it
There is no doubt that from the down of history most
people
used
to argue if it is your gender will give a better chance to
be employed
, The question, is it
faire
that what supposed to happen?

People
believe that
the structural of
females and males are
different
also
to take this in consideration it has
been known
about
men
the strength
so
, this a significant reason for him to be a plumber or deal with electricity,
in spite of
that no one of them decide his
own
gender
in that case
we ought to hire based on who
is qualified
.

furthermore
,
being talented
also
, it takes a huge requirement
additionally
, it is a bonus in your career, nowadays the deference between
men
and women it is fiddling,
on the contrary
from what it
used
to be which is male did not
use to
cook it is
women`s
job.
also
women supposed
to not to
war cause it is his issue.

In conclusion
, having various opinions in this them it will be
overmore
of we did not develop our
midset
and give the
proffision
who deserve it, not on something it has no choice with it
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IELTS essay There is no doubt that from the down of history most people used to argue

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
196 words
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