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In this day and age, embracing changes to improve personal development skills can bring new opportunities in the future. However, individuals, especially grown-ups, normally refuse to accept new things because of their fear to lose what they have already had. Several problems have resulted from this tendency and they should be tackled by some effective solutions from amending mentality and adaptability. First of all, one of the most apparent issues associated with this is that some people will be more like suffer from monotonous and lack of experience due to trapping in their former work for a long time. For instance, some Vietnamese especially grown-ups only have a nodding acquaintance with a major and do repetitive daily even for several years like a cycle leading feel bored and they are not interested in what they are doing which led to not effective in work. Some individuals are scared of taking the risk because they find it not easy to acquire good positions not only in a new career but also in relationships with colleagues as a result of declining quality of life than before. Moreover, another obvious problem is that those without changing minds tend to be old-fashioned in advanced technology, and this exerts such detrimental impacts upon a majority of older people There are several solutions to overcome these problems. One solution to this problem is for mature people need to dare to think and dare to challenge. In addition, older people can access the internet often to up-to-date information. In conclusion, there are various negative consequences of resisting any change in our life and appropriate steps need to be taken to tackle these problems to have better lives.

In this day and age, embracing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 personal development This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 can bring new opportunities in the future. However
, individuals, especially
 grown-ups, normally
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because
 of their fear to lose what they have already had. Several You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problems
 have resulted from this Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).tendency, and
tendency and
 they should be tackled
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some
 effective solutions from amending mentality and adaptability.

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, one of the most apparent issues associated with this is that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 will be more like suffer from monotonous and lack of experience due to trapping in their former work for a long time. For instance
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 Vietnamese especially
 grown-ups This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 have a nodding acquaintance with a major and do repetitive daily even for several years like a cycle leading feel Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).bored, and
bored and
 they are not interested in what they are doing which led to not effective in work. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 individuals are scared
 of taking the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazarddanger
risk
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they find it not easy to acquire This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 positions not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 in a new career This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 in relationships with colleagues as a result
 of declining quality of life than This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
.

Moreover
, another obvious You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problem
 is that those without changing minds tend to be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
-fashioned in advanced technology, and this exerts such detrimental impacts upon a majority of older This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people


There are several solutions to overcome these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problems
. One solution to this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problem
 is for mature This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 need to dare to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 and dare to challenge. In addition
, older This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 can access the internet This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 to up-to-date information.

In conclusion
, there are various This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 consequences of resisting any This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 in our life and appropriate steps need to be taken
 to tackle these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problems
 to have better This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
. 