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There is growing evidence that man made activities are making global temprature higher What might be the man made causes of temperatures rising How Should we deal with this problem

There is growing evidence that man made activities are making global temprature higher What might be the man made causes of temperatures rising How Should we deal with this problem 2Ebj
In the last few decades there is enronomous increase in earth temprature due to different human activities. It is an unarguable fact that man made activities are the primary cause of increasing temprature of earth. This essay will list out the causes and policy decisions that can help to deal with the problem. There are mainly 2 resones behind increase in temprature of earth. Significant use of Petrol and Diseal in Power Plants and Motor Vehicle resulted in excessive carbon in the atmosphere which detoriated the ozone layer that protect us from direct sun rays. In addition to this, unprecedented air pollution by different chemical companies and pharam companies are also one of the priamary resones for increasing earch tempratures. Though now it is very difficult to curb the earth temprature, it is still possible if governments and individual make severeal decisions. Governments and policy makers must focous on different renewable energy like wind, solar and hydro power this can help to reduce dependence on fossil fuels. For instance, use of electric public Bus and Taxies can help to reduce pollution. Further government should limit the polluted air emmission of different factories beyond certain limits. To Sum up we can say that it is very difficult to reduce the negative effects of pollution caused by man made activities on earth. However, governments and individuals must take strong action to save the enviornment for the future genreations
In the last few decades there is
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increase in
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earth
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temprature
due to
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different
human activities. It is an unarguable fact that
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man
made activities are the primary cause of increasing
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temprature
of
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earth
. This essay will list out the causes and policy decisions that can
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to deal with the problem.

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mainly
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resones
behind increase in
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temprature
of
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earth
. Significant
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of Petrol and
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Diseal
in Power Plants and Motor Vehicle resulted in excessive carbon in the atmosphere which
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detoriated
the ozone layer that protect us from direct sun rays.
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different
chemical
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temprature
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renewable energy like wind, solar and
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hydro power
this can
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pollution.
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emmission
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factories beyond certain limits.

To Sum up we can say that it is
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difficult to
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reduce
the
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negative
effects of pollution caused by
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man
made activities on
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earth
.
However
,
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governments
and individuals
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must
take strong action to save the
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enviornment
for the future
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IELTS essay There is growing evidence that man made activities are making global temprature higher What might be the man made causes of temperatures rising How Should we deal with this problem

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
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