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There has been many controversial arguments surrounding shopping online. While there are some advocates of disadvantages to shopping on the internet, I believe that it is better to go on the internet purchasing

There has been many controversial arguments surrounding shopping online. While there are some advocates of disadvantages to shopping on the internet, I believe that it is better to go on the internet purchasing. There are several reasons why consumers choose to purchase goods in this manner. Convenience is the key advantage here. People may buy and order their favorite things online with only a few clicks, and they will be at their doorsteps in no time. Furthermore, there are various shopping websites that provide substantial discounts on a variety of things, which is frequently seen as the most cost-effective way of spending money. To give you an example, one of the major online shopping websites, Amazon, provides its prime members a minimum of a 20% discount on each goods. Despite the numerous advantages, there are some drawbacks to purchasing things over the internet. The most important factor is the products lack of trustworthiness. Various merchants offer duplicate copies of things at low prices through these websites, and they deceive customers by supplying phony brand names. In India, 20 examples of fake commodities being sold using Flip cart have recently been recorded. Nonetheless, many websites provide services for the convenience of their customers, such as a refund policy, which allows consumers to return a product if they do not believe it is trustworthy. Despite some of the given counterarguments, I personally still strongly believe that shopping on the internet is one of the good ways to buy things. The benefits of this trend are so large that they might easily outweigh the drawbacks.

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 on the internet, I believe that it is better to go on the internet purchasing.

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 a few clicks, and they will be at their doorsteps in no time. Furthermore
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shopping
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goods
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some
 drawbacks to purchasing things over the internet. The most This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 factor is the products lack of trustworthiness. Various merchants offer duplicate copies of things at low prices through these websites, and they deceive customers by supplying phony brand names. In India, 20 examples of fake commodities being sold
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 websites provide services for the convenience of their customers, such as a refund policy, which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorizes
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some of the
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given
 counterarguments, I personally
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shopping
 on the internet is one of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
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 ways to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
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 things. The benefits of this trend are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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