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There has been an ongoing debate about food security: the availability of food and access to it. Some people have suggested that the use of genetically modified (GM) foods can help overcome the problem.

There has been an ongoing debate about food security: the availability of food and access to it. Some people have suggested that the use of genetically modified (GM) foods can help overcome the problem. 0E35O
GM crops are plants that have been modified, using genetic engineering, to alter their DNA sequences to provide some beneficial trait. I believe that GM can end world hunger. Many people doesn't believes that GM foods can the solution for world hunger, but scientist proves the GM foods is actually not bad. However it can harm the environment but at the same time it saves many people life by ending hunger in the world. Moreover, many children around the world goes to school with empty stomech. Every seconed a person dies due to world hunger. I believe that nobody should suffer from world hunger, this can be prevented through GM food. In conclusion, I believe that more people should invest more in GM food despite its environmental issues it could stop world hunger.
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beneficial trait. I
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that GM can
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end
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hunger.

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, this can be
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prevented
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, I
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should invest more in GM food despite its environmental issues it could
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IELTS essay There has been an ongoing debate about food security: the availability of food and access to it. Some people have suggested that the use of genetically modified (GM) foods can help overcome the problem.

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