Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking
1. Latest Topics
2. Speaking Club

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

There are various sports activities available from which people can relax their mind from daily routine. Some people think that intense sports for example sky diving and skiing are harmful and should be banned. I disagree with the given statement, and this essay will discuss both sides in brief.

There are various sports activities available from which people can relax their mind from daily routine. Some people think that intense sports for example sky diving and skiing are harmful and should be banned. I disagree with the given statement, and this essay will mbox8

To begin with, such type of activity can make someone's future too. Highly professional trainers and stuntmen can earn a huge amount from this field. Secondly, sky diving and skiing are performed only after proper training. The fresher who do not know anything about such type of activity are not allowed to do. Also, both sports are performed under guidance only. The criteria are selected by organizers thus no one exposes to harm. Moreover, a safety kit is provided to participants. Additionally, a health checkup is also done for participants of skydiving. Fear such as high phobia can evade by experiencing sky diving. On the other hand, opponents agree that this activity should be banned owing to the fact that they do not like to take any risk to life. Some inhabitants think that this type of sports is highly cost-effective and not everyone can learn this activity. Moreover, these activities are most popular in young ones there for dislike by older people. To conclude, precaution must be taken while performing sky diving and skiing but can not be banned totally.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, such type of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activity
 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 someone's future too. Highly
 professional trainers and stuntmen can earn a huge amount from this field. Secondly
, Did you mean "skydiving"?skydiving
sky diving
 and skiing are performed
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 after proper training. The fresher who do not know anything about such type of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activity
 are not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
allowed
 to do. Also
, both sports are performed
 under guidance This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
. The criteria are selected
 by organizers thus
 no one exposes to harm. Moreover
, a safety kit is provided
 to participants. Additionally
, a health checkup is also
 done for participants of skydiving. Fear such as high phobia can evade by experiencing Did you mean "skydiving"?skydiving
sky diving
.

On the other hand
, opponents This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 that this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activity
 should be banned
 owing to the fact that they do not like to take any This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazarddanger
risk
 to life. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 inhabitants This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that this type of sports is highly
 cost-effective and not everyone can learn this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activity
. Moreover
, these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activities
 are most popular in young ones there for dislike by older This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
.

To conclude
, precaution This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
be taken
 while performing Did you mean "skydiving"?skydiving
sky diving
 and skiing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 can not be banned
totally
. 