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there are various occasions on which people give gifts to each other

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there are various occasions on which people give gifts to each other. for instance birthdays, marriage ceremonies, mather's and father's day and so on. besides, gifts are tokens of love therefore when we want to show how much we love someone, we give him or her a gift. In my country, it is our custom not to visit someone else's house empty-handed that's why people usually give some items like chocolate to their host as a gift. However, when someone has bought a house or changed his house, we buy him a more expensive gift. The last time I received a gift was about three months ago when my husband give me a smartwatch for my birthday. Although I have a penchant for buying gifts for my dearest friends and family, however, sometimes it's incredibly difficult for me to buy suitable gifts.
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IELTS essay there are various occasions on which people give gifts to each other

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
142 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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