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• One of the most important reasons why I choose to study in Canada is because of the high quality of education and industry-relevant curriculum.

• One of the most important reasons why I choose to study in Canada is because of the high quality of education and industry-relevant curriculum. QKw2L
• One of the most important reasons why I choose to study in Canada is because of the high quality of education and industry-relevant curriculum. • Tuition fee in Canada, when compared to universities in the US and UK, is fairly cheaper. • Canada has been consistently ranked as one of the safest nations in the world • Thanks to its special regulations, Canada provides all its international students with an opportunity to work for up to 20 hours every week during their semesters and full-time during the summer and winter breaks. • Canada is a culturally vibrant nation where people of different ethnicities and backdrops harmoniously co-exist safely without any fear of racial discrimination.
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reasons why I choose to study in Canada is
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because
of the high quality of education and industry-relevant curriculum.

• Tuition fee in Canada, when compared to universities in the US and UK, is
fairly
cheaper.

• Canada has been
consistently
ranked as one of the safest nations in the world

• Thanks to its special regulations, Canada provides all its international students with an opportunity to work for up to 20 hours every week during their semesters and full-time during the summer and winter breaks.

• Canada is a
culturally
vibrant nation where
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people
of
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different
ethnicities and backdrops
harmoniously
co-exist
safely
without any fear of racial discrimination.
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IELTS essay • One of the most important reasons why I choose to study in Canada is because of the high quality of education and industry-relevant curriculum.

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110 words
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