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Sometimes we do not have enough time to have a photographer for personal photos. In these cases, use the automatic photo boot device. First of all you have to choose the size of your photos, large format or passport size Second, you need to select the type of photo you want in black and white or in color. Then you have to pay for the photos. After that, you can enter the cabin and use the device First you can use the mirror to sort yourself Then adjust the position of the eyes with an adjustable chair. Make sure the cabin door is closed or the curtain is drawn, then pull the lever in front and wait for the flash to light up after 3 seconds. That's it, Mitt, get out of the cabin and see the printed photos.
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Sometimes
we do not have
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enough
time to have a photographer for personal
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photos
. In these cases,
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use
the automatic
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photo
boot device.
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First of all
you
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have to
choose the size of your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
photos
, large format or passport size

Second, you need to select the type of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
photo
you want in black and white or in color.

Then you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
pay for the photos.

After that, you can enter the cabin and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the device

First
you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the mirror to sort yourself

Then adjust the position of the eyes with an adjustable chair.
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Make
sure the cabin door
is closed
or the curtain
is drawn
, then pull the lever in front and wait for the flash to light up after 3 seconds.

That's it, Mitt,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
out of the cabin and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
the printed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
photos
.

IELTS essay automatic photo boot device

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
139 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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