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There are some today who Nould argue that the internet has svificiently Supplant ed the role of traditional education as to make it redundant.

There are some today who Nould argue that the internet has svificiently Supplant ed the role of traditional education as to make it redundant. MNoo
There are some today who Nould argue that the internet has svificiently Supplant ed the role of traditional education as to make it redundant. so In my opinion, though the internet opens up possibilities for learning -by myself d home, library is a crucial filter mere. None the less, library is the real place to learn or find some information. more than at home So I prefer studying at a more. ond my favorite subject is boloy because ds living beings that dre on other creatyres for our existence it makes sense to have some kind of inbuit fascination with how living things funclion and their complex relationships nith edch cher
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IELTS essay There are some today who Nould argue that the internet has svificiently Supplant ed the role of traditional education as to make it redundant.

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