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there are several surprising beliefs about elephants

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The author of the reading believes that there are several surprising beliefs about elephants, and provides three reasons of support. However, the lecturer rejects the claim made in the reading, casting doubt on all the three reasons presented in the passage. First, according to the reading, elephants are aware about their death's time, and they leave their herds and live alone near water. This point is challenged by the lecturer. She says that it is true that old elephants break away from their herds, but their leaving is for finding some soft food. She elaborates on this by mentioning that in old ages elephants don't have teeth, and they should find soft food that is in water. So they should live near water. Second, the author states that, elephants are capable to painting. The lecturer rebuts this. She mentions that elephants’ ears are so sensitive, and human make use of their ears for training. As a result, by touching elephants’ ears, they learn how to paint. Finally, the reading passage asserts that elephants have a fear of mice. The lecturer, on the other hand, states that this claim is problematic. She explains that elephants have a fear of mice because mice are unknown for elephants. She puts forth the idea that when elephants are familiar with mice, they do not afraid of them such as situation in zoos that both elephants and mice live with each other, and elephants do not mind mice.

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reading
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elephants
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lecturer
, on the other hand
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. She puts forth the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
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elephants
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