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In summary, it is a professional and elaborate working environment, combined with modern equipment. But the harmony between individuals and organizations in an enterprise may sometimes not respect each other in building comments, leading to conflicts.

In summary, it is a professional and elaborate working environment, combined with modern equipment. But the harmony between individuals and organizations in an enterprise may sometimes not respect each other in building comments, leading to conflicts. LLb5K
Choosing the geographical environment as a field area in Vietnam is to create favorable conditions for work to directly contact customers, improve the ability to attract customers, penetrate and dominate. A critical trend is to break upfield or establishments, located right in the consumer market consequently that field maintains close relationships with customers. In summary, it is a professional and elaborate working environment, combined with modern equipment. But the harmony between individuals and organizations in an enterprise may sometimes not respect each other in building comments, leading to conflicts.
Choosing the geographical environment as a field area in Vietnam is to create favorable conditions for work to
directly
contact customers,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
the ability to attract customers, penetrate and dominate.

A critical trend is to break
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upfield
or establishments, located right in the consumer market
consequently
that field maintains close relationships with customers.

In summary, it is a professional and elaborate working environment, combined with modern equipment.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
the harmony between individuals and organizations in an enterprise may
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
not respect each other in building comments, leading to conflicts.
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IELTS essay In summary, it is a professional and elaborate working environment, combined with modern equipment. But the harmony between individuals and organizations in an enterprise may sometimes not respect each other in building comments, leading to conflicts.

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