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There are more important factors besides money that make us feel happy.

There are more important factors besides money that make us feel happy. JL6r0

There are more important factors besides money that make us feel happy. The first factor is family. The reason is that family is very important in our life, all family members always make us never feel solitary and alone. They also share all ups and downs in life with us when we get into troubles. We can also receive encouragement from other members in family, which helps us have more motivation. Secondly, having best friends is also a good thing. This is caused by the fact that a good friend always companies with us and encourages us when we feel blue. Furthermore, when we get lost, friends also give us valuable advices. Finally, heath is a very important factor. For example, a person with a lot of money but no health will also find life boring because he can not do the things he wants such as learning or discovering new things.

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