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In the past people used more formal and long expressions to communicate with each other. Nowadays, we use fewer words and are more informed. Why is this happening? Use examples and specific details to explain your answer.

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In the previous time people used more formal and complicated expressions to interacted with each other. However, in these days individuals use limited words and more informal. Reason by presence of wide range of technologies which was not available in the past. Secondly, Due to hectic schedule of people. To commence with, there are certain reasons for why nowadays people use fewer words and more informal. Firstly, Huge variety of new technologies make people more informal. Social networking sites are provide convenient and fastest mode of communication. People use emails, text messages to convey their information which other person receive within seconds. These facilities were not available in previous time. They used writing letters to delivered their message toward others which was time consuming task. Consequently, people prefer to use quick informal ways to send their details. For instance, Recent survey shows, Huge proportion of people give up on writing letters and adopt finest methods of communication like internet. Furthermore, people have hectic schedule. They cannot wait for long time to dispatch and attain transmission. They are struggling to save their time as much as possible so that they can perform some other works. They could transfer their communication through short words with full sense that people could easily understand what sender try to tell them. This technique could save lots of time and energy to understand conversation with less expressions and words. For instance, nowadays people use whatsApp, Facebook and Skype to interact with others by sending short words and expressions. This is effective informal way to convey information. To conclude, Without a doubt, there are number of causes available hidden behind why people use fewer words and more informal as compare to past with availability of technology and busy schedule.
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more formal and complicated expressions to interacted with each
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other
.
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, in these days individuals
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use
limited words and more
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informal
. Reason by presence of wide range of technologies which was not available in the past.
Secondly
, Due to hectic schedule of
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people
.

To commence with, there are certain reasons for why nowadays
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people
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use
fewer words and more
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informal
.
Firstly
, Huge variety of new technologies
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make
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people
more
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informal
. Social networking sites are
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provide
convenient and fastest mode of communication.
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People
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use
emails, text messages to convey their information which
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other
person receive within seconds. These facilities were not available in previous
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time
. They
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used
writing letters to delivered their message toward others which was
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time consuming
task.
Consequently
,
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people
prefer to
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use
quick
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informal
ways to
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send
their
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details
.
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, Recent survey
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shows
, Huge proportion of
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people
give up on writing letters and adopt
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finest
methods of communication like internet.

Furthermore
,
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people
have hectic schedule. They cannot wait for long
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time
to dispatch and attain transmission. They are struggling to save their
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time
as much as possible
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so
that they can perform
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some
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other
works.
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They
could transfer their communication through short words with full sense that
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people
could
easily
understand what sender try to
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tell
them. This technique could save lots of
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time
and energy to understand conversation with
Did you mean "fewer"? The noun expressions is countable.
less
expressions and words.
For instance
, nowadays
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people
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use
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whatsApp
, Facebook and Skype to interact with others by sending short words and expressions. This is effective
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
informal
way to convey information.

To conclude
, Without a doubt, there are number of causes available hidden behind why
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
fewer words and more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
informal
as compare to past with availability of technology and busy schedule.
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IELTS essay In the past people used more formal and long expressions to communicate with each other. Nowadays, we use fewer words and are more informed. Why is this happening? Use examples and specific details to explain your answer.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
292 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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