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There are more cars on the roads these days and more accidents are happening. As a result, some politicians have suggested that people should take regular driving tests throughout their lives, rather than one single test. What do you think are the advantages of repeat driving tests? Do these outweigh the disadvantages? v.3

There are more cars on the roads these days and more accidents are happening. As a result, some politicians have suggested that people should take regular driving tests throughout their lives, rather than one single test. What do you think are the advantages of repeat driving tests? Do these outweigh the disadvantages? v. 3
The number of cars on roads is increasing rapidly these days which is aligned with the number of car accidents. Consequently, some authorities believe that all driving licence holders must take driving tests every year, rather than doing it once in their life. The following essay will discuss the positive and the negative sides of the routine test, but I do believe that it has more benefits than drawbacks. On the one hand, it is undeniable that doing a driving test annually would have some disadvantages. One of the reasons is the time and preparation it would require. In addition, people would have to pay every year for taking the test. Lastly, they also believe that it would cost more for the government, as they must provide additional manpower in the driving test centres. Despite all the negative sides, performing a driving test on an annual basis would have some benefits for everybody. Firstly, by having a yearly driving test, each driver would be refreshed and updated with all driving regulations. Secondly, drivers would be more cautious and more careful when they drive, as their license will be checked regularly. Thirdly, it will reduce the number of traffic accidents, because the driver's physical condition would also be checked as a part of the test. For example, each driver's eyesight would be examined as some driver might have problems with their views. In conclusion, it is indisputable that performing a driving test each year has its own drawbacks, but I do believe that it has more benefits for everybody. By doing the test regularly, people will be more aware and cautious of their driving style which will reduce the number of accidents.
The
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of cars on roads is increasing
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these days which
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number
of car accidents.
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,
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some
authorities
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believe
that all
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driving
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licence
holders
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take
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driving
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tests
every year,
rather
than doing it once in their life. The following essay will discuss the
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positive
and the
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negative
sides of the routine
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test
,
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but
I do
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believe
that it has more benefits than drawbacks.

On the one hand, it is undeniable that doing a
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driving
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test
annually
would have
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some
disadvantages. One of the reasons is the time and preparation it would require.
In addition
,
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people
would
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have to
pay every year for taking the
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test
.
Lastly
, they
also
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believe
that it would cost more for the
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government
, as they
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must
provide additional manpower in the
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driving
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test
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centres
.

Despite all the
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negative
sides, performing a
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driving
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test
on an annual basis would have
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some
benefits for everybody.
Firstly
, by having a yearly
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driving
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test
, each driver would
be refreshed
and updated with all
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driving
regulations.
Secondly
, drivers would be more cautious and more careful when they drive, as their license will be
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checked
regularly
.
Thirdly
, it will
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reduce
the
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number
of traffic accidents,
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because
the driver's physical condition would
also
be
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checked
as a part of the
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test
.
For example
, each driver's eyesight would
be examined
as
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some
driver might have problems with their views.

In conclusion
, it is indisputable that performing a
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driving
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test
each year has its
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own
drawbacks,
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but
I do
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believe
that it has more benefits for everybody. By doing the
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test
regularly
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
will be more aware and cautious of their
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driving
style which will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the
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number
of accidents.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
27Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS essay There are more cars on the roads these days and more accidents are happening. As a result, some politicians have suggested that people should take regular driving tests throughout their lives, rather than one single test. What do you think are the advantages of repeat driving tests? Do these outweigh the disadvantages? v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
281 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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