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There are more cars on the roads these days and more accidents are happening. As a result, some politicians have suggested that people should take regular driving tests throughout their lives, rather than one single test. What do you think are the advantages of repeat driving tests? Do these outweigh the disadvantages? v.1

There are more cars on the roads these days and more accidents are happening. As a result, some politicians have suggested that people should take regular driving tests throughout their lives, rather than one single test. What do you think are the advantages of repeat driving tests? Do these outweigh the disadvantages? v. 1
In most of the countries, people take a driving test before they are awarded the driving licence and renewal of driving licence does not require the person to retake the test. Some politicians, however, suggest that repetitive test should replace the 'test once in a lifetime' policy. Undeniably, the proposed policy has some advantages but the drawbacks are far greater. To begin with, the recursive driving test seems like a solution to the increasing driving offence but in reality, people's carelessness, violation of traffic rules and driving under the influence are the main causes for most of the accidents. Therefore the authorities should spend more money and manpower for ensuring road safety than retesting driver's ability. It is a scientific fact that adept drivers are less likely to forget their driving skill unless they get physically unfit. Considering this, the authority should update the drivers about the changes of traffic rules, not test their ability to drive a vehicle. Moreover, strict punishment and penalty should be imposed for the traffic rule violation. Furthermore, a periodic driving test would kill people's money, time and energy on the one hand and drain the government's budget on the other hand. According to a recent report, new applicants have to wait for several weeks to get a driving licence due to the insufficient facility and manpower. Having the repetitive driving skill test would thus make this far worse. To conclude, rather than questing people's ability to remember how to drive, strict policies and road safety should get priority. Driver's should be educated not tested on their ability to drive a car as this proposed policy would add burden both to the ordinary people and the authority.
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take a
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test
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before
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the
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driving
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licence
and renewal of
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driving
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licence
does not require the person to retake the
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test
.
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politicians,
however
, suggest that repetitive
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test
should replace the '
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test
once in a lifetime'
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policy
.
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, the proposed
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policy
has
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some
advantages
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but
the drawbacks are far greater.

To
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begin
with, the recursive
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driving
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test
seems like a solution to the increasing
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driving
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offence
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but
in reality,
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people
's carelessness, violation of traffic
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rules
and
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driving
under the influence are the main causes for most of the accidents.
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Therefore
the authorities should spend more money and manpower for ensuring road safety than retesting driver's
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ability
. It is a scientific fact that adept drivers are less likely to forget their
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driving
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skill
unless they
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get
physically
unfit. Considering this, the authority should update the drivers about the
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changes
of traffic
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rules
, not
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test
their
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ability
to drive a vehicle.
Moreover
, strict punishment and penalty should
be imposed
for the traffic
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rule
violation.

Furthermore
, a periodic
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driving
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test
would kill
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people
's money, time and energy on the one hand and drain the
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government
's budget
on the other hand
. According to a recent report, new applicants
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have to
wait for several weeks to
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get
a
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driving
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licence
due to the insufficient facility and manpower. Having the repetitive
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driving
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skill
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test
would
thus
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make
this far worse.

To conclude
,
rather
than questing
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people
's
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ability
to remember how to drive, strict
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policies
and road safety should
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get
priority. Driver's should
be educated
not
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tested
on their
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ability
to drive a car as this proposed
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policy
would
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add
burden both to the ordinary
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people
and the authority.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
25Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS essay There are more cars on the roads these days and more accidents are happening. As a result, some politicians have suggested that people should take regular driving tests throughout their lives, rather than one single test. What do you think are the advantages of repeat driving tests? Do these outweigh the disadvantages? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
282 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
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  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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