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There are more cars on the roads these days and more accidents are happening. As a result, some politicians have suggested that people should take regular driving tests throughout their lives, rather than one single test. What do you think are the advantages of repeat driving tests? Do these outweigh the disadvantages? v.2

There are more cars on the roads these days and more accidents are happening. As a result, some politicians have suggested that people should take regular driving tests throughout their lives, rather than one single test. What do you think are the advantages of repeat driving tests? Do these outweigh the disadvantages? v. 2
The growing number of cars and reckless driving are the major causes of increasing road accidents these days. Therefore, some people, as well as some politicians, express their view that repetitive driving tests, not just once to get the licence, should be in place. This essay presents my views in favour of the continuous testing process for driving with some appropriate reasons and examples. The road safety in a country is a major concern and so is the obligation of politicians regarding this. This is because increasing vehicular movements can cause more accidents on the roads. Additionally, drivers, on the other hand, get outdated to incorporate with road rules accurately. For example, they may not be able to see the traffic signals and road signs easily when they get older. As a result, such drivers may potentially hit other moving vehicles and the people. Therefore, the repeat tests for driving, from time to time, will definitely improve the driving accuracy of people. Moreover, in many countries young drivers often do not abide by the traffic rules and having continuous tests would ensure their awareness in safe driving. Finally, when people will have to take driving tests periodically, they will less likely violate any traffic rule. However, the multiple tests for driving in our lifetime may unnecessarily impose a burden. This is because we have to prepare for the test in order to renew the licence. Additionally, we will have to pay the exam fees every time which is considered an unwanted expense by many. As a result, many of us may tend to avoid the tests and this will lead to a situation that one day we will get pulled over and fined for an outdated licence. Therefore, continuous tests may not solve the raised issue easily while the drivers will always be under a pressure. In conclusion, as reoccurring tests improve our driving accuracy, the benefits of such test surpass the drawbacks.
The growing number of cars and reckless
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are the major causes of increasing
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road
accidents these days.
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some
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people
,
as well
as
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politicians, express their view that repetitive
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driving
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tests
, not
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just
once to
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licence
, should be in place. This essay presents my views in
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favour
of the continuous testing process for
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driving
with
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some
appropriate reasons and examples.

The
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road
safety in a country is a major concern and
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so
is the obligation of politicians regarding this. This is
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because
increasing vehicular movements can cause more accidents on the
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roads
.
Additionally
,
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drivers
,
on the other hand
,
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get
outdated to incorporate with
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road
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rules
accurately
.
For example
, they may not be able to
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see
the traffic signals and
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road
signs
easily
when they
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get
older.
As a result
, such
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drivers
may
potentially
hit other moving vehicles and the
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people
.
Therefore
, the repeat
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tests
for
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driving
, from time to time, will definitely
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improve
the
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driving
accuracy of
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people
.
Moreover
, in
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many
countries young
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drivers
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often
do not abide by the traffic
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rules
and having continuous
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tests
would ensure their awareness in safe
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driving
.
Finally
, when
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people
will
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have to
take
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driving
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tests
periodically
, they will less likely violate any traffic
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rule
.

However
, the multiple
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tests
for
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driving
in our lifetime may
unnecessarily
impose a burden. This is
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because
we
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have to
prepare for the
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test
in order to renew the
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licence
.
Additionally
, we will
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have to
pay the exam fees every time which
is considered
an unwanted expense by
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many
.
As a result
,
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many
of us may tend to avoid the
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tests
and this will lead to a situation that one day we will
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get
pulled over and fined for an outdated
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licence
.
Therefore
, continuous
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tests
may not solve the raised issue
easily
while the
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drivers
will always be under a pressure.

In conclusion
, as reoccurring
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tests
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improve
our
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driving
accuracy, the benefits of such
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test
surpass the drawbacks.
19Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
32Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
Language shapes the way we think, and determines what we can think about.
Benjamin Lee Whorf

IELTS essay There are more cars on the roads these days and more accidents are happening. As a result, some politicians have suggested that people should take regular driving tests throughout their lives, rather than one single test. What do you think are the advantages of repeat driving tests? Do these outweigh the disadvantages? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
323 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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