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THERE ARE MORE AND MORE PEOPLE WHO SPEND A PERIOD OF TIME STUDYING IN FOREIGN COUNTRIES. WHAT ARE THE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF THIS?

THERE ARE MORE AND MORE PEOPLE WHO SPEND A PERIOD OF TIME STUDYING IN FOREIGN COUNTRIES. WHAT ARE THE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF THIS? gD85a

These days, studying abroad is increasingly popular in many countries. It opens the attractive opportunities to spend a period of time studying mainly for young adults, however, there are pros and cons in deciding to do this. This essay will explore the benefits and drawbacks to be overcome. One of the advantages of this trend is that overseas students can broaden their horizon. With the advanced academic environment, helpful professors as well as classmates form different culture backgrounds, they may enjoy studying and expand their knowledge even life experience. As the result, this makes them rounded as a person. Another advantage is that improving the future working skills

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IELTS essay THERE ARE MORE AND MORE PEOPLE WHO SPEND A PERIOD OF TIME STUDYING IN FOREIGN COUNTRIES. WHAT ARE THE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF THIS?

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American English

2 paragraphs

107 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Lexical Resource: 6.5

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