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There are five people in my family-my parents, two brothers and me.

There are five people in my family-my parents, two brothers and me. ewQ2A

There are five people in my family-my parents, two brothers and me. We are living in Nghe An at the moment. This year, my dad is forty-five years old. My dad is four years older than my mom is. My parents are farmers. My father like reading the newspaper every night. My mother cooks very well. I have two younger brothers. My brother in third grade is very active and mischievous. The older brother is an introversive person. He enjoys reading books at weekends and whenever I have freetime. I am a freshman in the university of Da Nang –university of Economics. My major is data science and business analytics. I love my family.

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brothers
 and me. We are living in Possible spelling mistake found.NGE
Nghe
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old
. My dad is four years older than my mom is. My parents are farmers. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
My
 father like reading the newspaper every night. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
My
 mother cooks This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 well.

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. My You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrelativetwin
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 in third grade is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
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 active and mischievous. The older You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrelativetwin
brother
 is an Possible spelling mistake found.introversion
introversive
 person. He enjoys reading books at weekends and whenever I have Possible spelling mistake found.free time
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 –university of Economics. My major is data science and business analytics. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 my family. 