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There are five people in my family-my parents, two brothers and me.

There are five people in my family-my parents, two brothers and me. ewQ2A
There are five people in my family-my parents, two brothers and me. We are living in Nghe An at the moment. This year, my dad is forty-five years old. My dad is four years older than my mom is. My parents are farmers. My father like reading the newspaper every night. My mother cooks very well. I have two younger brothers. My brother in third grade is very active and mischievous. The older brother is an introversive person. He enjoys reading books at weekends and whenever I have freetime. I am a freshman in the university of Da Nang –university of Economics. My major is data science and business analytics. I love my family.
There are five
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in my family-my parents, two
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brothers
and me. We are living in
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Nghe
An at the moment. This year, my dad is forty-five years
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. My dad is four years older than my mom is. My parents are farmers.
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My
father like reading the newspaper every night.
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My
mother cooks
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well.

I have two younger
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brothers
. My
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brother
in third grade is
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very
active and mischievous. The older
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brother
is an
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introversive
person. He enjoys reading books at weekends and whenever I have
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freetime
. I am a freshman in the university of
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Da
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Nang
–university of Economics. My major is data science and business analytics. I
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IELTS essay There are five people in my family-my parents, two brothers and me.

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2 paragraphs
114 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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