Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

There are fewer and fewer emplohment opportunities for graduates

There are fewer and fewer emplohment opportunities for graduates 0ARR5

Health, education and trade are considered a key for developing the underprivileged countries and it is the responsibility of government of richer nations to improve these three sections of nations that are poor. I partially agree with this statement and this essay will support my opinion. First and foremost, underdeveloped countries can seek help of developed nations have better economic conditions. As they can provide some financial help, resources for development, especially in case of technology that ultimately increase the education system. Even rich nations can install their projects in poor countries through which the employment can be generated. Hence, due to more employment opportunities economy of the country will grow. Moreover, some projects in relation to farming as well as sectors may show a positive impact on per capita income. On the other hand, even rich countries would not be able to develop a undeveloped nation until and unless the country themselves makes a effort to grow their gross domestic product. For instance, there is a country named Cuba, it was the time when all countries had started withdrawing the commercial as well as social relationships and began to protest against Cuba, the transfer of essential machinery and hybrid seeds were banned by other nations. But the people of Cuba did not give up, they started cultivating crops with traditional farming methods and developed their economy. To conclude, in some cases, it becomes necessary to take assistance from other nations. But, the country can also become self sufficient by modifying some procedures for doing different work.

Health, education and trade are considered
 a key for developing the underprivileged You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 and it is the responsibility of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 of richer You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtribedemocracypeopleunioncommunitysociety
nations
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 these three sections of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtribedemocracypeopleunioncommunitysociety
nations
 that are poor. I partially
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with this statement and this essay will support my opinion.

First
 and foremost, underdeveloped You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 can seek This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of developed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtribedemocracypeopleunioncommunitysociety
nations
 have better economic conditions. As they can provide This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 financial This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
, resources for development, especially
 in case of technology that ultimately
 increase the education system. Even rich You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtribedemocracypeopleunioncommunitysociety
nations
 can install their projects in poor You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 through which the employment can be generated
. Hence
, due to more employment opportunities economy of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 will grow. Moreover
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 projects in relation to farming as well
 as sectors may This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 impact on per capita income.

On the other hand
, even rich You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 would not be able to develop Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 undeveloped You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtribedemocracypeopleunioncommunitysociety
nation
 until and unless the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 themselves This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 effort to grow their gross domestic product. For instance
, there is a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 named Cuba, it was the time when all You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 withdrawing the commercial as well
 as social relationships and began to protest against Cuba, the transfer of essential machinery and hybrid seeds were banned
 by other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtribedemocracypeopleunioncommunitysociety
nations
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 of Cuba did not give up, they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 cultivating crops with traditional farming methods and developed their economy.

To conclude
, in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 cases, it becomes necessary to take assistance from other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtribedemocracypeopleunioncommunitysociety
nations
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 can also
 become This word is normally spelled with hyphen.self-sufficient
self sufficient
 by modifying This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 procedures for doing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 work. 