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There are a lot of changes in my village in recent years

There are a lot of changes in my village in recent years Mq2xN
There are a lot of changes in my village in recent years. In the past, we did not have TV zo our knowledge about the outside was very little, but thanks to the development, now, each family in my village has a TV and modern electric devices which help us know more about life outside the village and even around the world. Next, it is the roads. The roads used to be made with dirt in the past few years, but now, the roads are made with cement and bricks so it is easy to travel
There are
a lot of
changes
in my village in recent years. In the past, we did not have TV
zo
our knowledge about the outside was
very
little
,
but
thanks to the development,
now
, each family in my village has a TV and modern electric devices which
help
us know more about life outside the village and even around the world.
Next
, it is the roads. The roads
used
to
be made
with dirt in the past few years,
but
now
, the roads
are made
with cement and bricks
so
it is easy to
travel
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IELTS essay There are a lot of changes in my village in recent years

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
95 words
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5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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