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Theatre or cinema.Which is good for you?

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Cinema has got an important role in the life of any society. Cinema has become a part of the modern way of life. In the eariest years of cinema its power to show the contemporary events was recognized. Maybe you chooce cinema. Because it will be very fantastic or horror. It depends with your mind. On the other hand cinema has some disadvantages too. For example it is not natural. When you watch a movie, it is not shown exactly as it was taken, that is, it is added to it. Therefore, its naturalness is lost. The theater was first performed by the Greeks. Many celebrities have commented on the theater. For example Do Vinci. In the theater you see live communication and feel with your whole body what is happening there. There will be no lies in the theater, everything will happen in front of your eyes. Most importantly, you can interact live with the actors there. So no one can influence your choice of cinema or theater depending on you. It is up to you to choose one of the two.
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For example
Do Vinci. In the
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theater
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communication and feel with your whole body what is happening there. There will be no lies in the
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, everything will happen in front of your eyes. Most
importantly
, you can interact
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with the actors there.

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IELTS essay Theatre or cinema. Which is good for you?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
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