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Although, promotions and advertising are these days being considered as the driving force behind a successful business. There are a certain group of people who believe it as an ideal and fair move in boosting their organization's revenue. Contrary to this there are a group of citizens who believe that it has numerous pitfalls. The following composition will give you a synopsis of both the views Advertisement helps new companies to reach out to customers and showcase their product catalogues. In fact big giants these days are hiring celebrities to make their product a high end brand. Besides, the organizations also tend to hire advertising agencies to promote their new products. For instance, Surf Excel has recently launched a liquid product that is claimed to dissolve easily without creating undissolved marks on apparel. The product was being promoted by Plus Advertising Agency on one of its prime location hoarding of Sabarmati Expressway. Moreover, advertisement attracts more customers in the name of promotions. For example, there are certain times D-Mart promotes its outlets by offering goods at cost prices. On the other side, Advertising has its own demerits. Companies over-hype the quality of the product. With the help of numerous advertisements and deals they persuade the customers to purchase their product indeed of lower quality. To illustrate further, users are being lured in the name of famed brands while upon delivery the customers end up receiving a cheap good resulting in disheartened shoppers. Additionally, promotions also create a social imbalance encouraging people to improper and excessive utilization of resources. Let's say, a family of 5 who was healthy consuming 500 grams of rice will now think to eat 700 grams resulting in wastage of resources. To conclude, I would say that advertisements and promotions can be beneficial for the economically backward classes but it should be done under the supervision of a strong regulation team from the ministry of commerce and investment.

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fair
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helps
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companies
 to reach out to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclientconsumerpatronpurchaser
customers
 and showcase their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
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catalogues
. In fact This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
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make
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product
 a high This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 brand. Besides
, the organizations also
 tend to hire advertising agencies to promote their new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
products
. For instance
, Surf Excel has recently launched a liquid You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
 that is claimed
 to dissolve easily
 without creating undissolved marks on apparel. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
 was being promoted
 by Plus Advertising Agency on one of its prime location hoarding of Possible spelling mistake found.
Sabarmati
 Expressway. Moreover
, advertisement attracts more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclientconsumerpatronpurchaser
customers
 in the name of promotions. For example
, there are certain times D-Mart promotes its outlets by offering This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 at cost prices.

On the other side, Advertising has its This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 demerits. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
Companies
 over-hype the quality of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
. With the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of numerous advertisements and deals they persuade the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclientconsumerpatronpurchaser
customers
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
indeed
 of lower quality. To illustrate further
, users are being lured
 in the name of famed brands while upon delivery the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclientconsumerpatronpurchaser
customers
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 up receiving a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :economical
cheap
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 resulting in disheartened shoppers. Additionally
, promotions also
 create a social imbalance encouraging This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to improper and excessive utilization of resources. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
's say, a family of 5 who was healthy consuming 500 grams of rice will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 to eat 700 grams resulting in wastage of resources.

To conclude
, I would say that advertisements and promotions can be beneficial for the economically
 backward classes This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it should be done
 under the supervision of a strong regulation team from the ministry of commerce and investment. 