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Comedy, romance and action movies that i liked

Comedy, romance and action movies that i liked 3AN6J
I would like to write about movies because most of my time I watch movie. My Best movies type is comedy, romance and drama. Kefen Hart is one of the must popular actress in this type. Lately I watched Fatherhood on Netflix it was awesome. It’s store about man he lost his wife during deliveries there baby girl. Then he fights his wife mother for the baby. It is a wonderful movie I’ll recommend it. Another movie called The blind side it’s a comedy drama movie based on true story in USA. Is about a black teenager who go to a white Catholic school, then some woman adopt him and every one were agents her choice. On the other hand there are the action movies unfortunately I’m not a big fan but there is a one movie which move my hart. Is name a Worth of men. About a mafia’s man and his son killed by some gang and he try to revenge.
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type is comedy, romance and drama.
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Fatherhood on Netflix it was awesome. It’s store about
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he lost his wife during deliveries there baby girl. Then he fights his wife mother for the baby. It is a wonderful
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I’ll recommend it. Another
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called The blind side it’s a comedy drama
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based on true story
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adopt him and every one were agents her choice.
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IELTS essay Comedy, romance and action movies that i liked

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