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The young queen bee, after adulthood, spends a few days in the hive, where the workers don't pay much attention to her until she is fertilized (we may note that it was previously thought that the bee was G

The young queen bee, after adulthood, spends a few days in the hive, where the workers don't pay much attention to her until she is fertilized (we may note that it was previously thought that the bee was God only mate once; now we know that the sperm of a single male won't be enough to survive a monarch for many years and it actually mate with five to ten males). Later, the colony was seized with unusual excitement, in which the temperature could reach 40 ° C. When winter came, the males were 'slaughtered, or simply expelled from the female. cold quickly kills them. The queen stops laying and the bees form a mass that resembles a bunch of grapes, where the temperature is kėpt at 12–15 ° C even when it is freezing outside. In the parent comb, the central part of the comb, where eggs, larvae and nymphs are found, the temperature during the breeding season remains constant at 33-34 ° C, again facilitating that sufficient sugar is present. . They gather together in the middle of the nest to form an almost stationary cluster, in the center the temperature will rarely drop below 13 ° C regardless of the outside weather.

The young queen bee, after adulthood, spends a few days in the hive, where the workers don't pay much attention to her until she is fertilized
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 mate once; This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 we know that the sperm of a single male won't be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
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 years and it actually Did you mean "mates"?mates
mate
 with five to ten males). Later, the colony was seized
 with unusual excitement, in which the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatcoldclimateconditionwarmth
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 could reach For the unit symbols for degree, minute, and second for plane angle no space is left between the numerical value and the unit symbol: "40°" or add a missing unit symbol (e.g., "40 °C").40°40 °C
40 ° 
C. When winter came, the males were 'slaughtered, or simply
 expelled from the female. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterCold
cold
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 kills them. The queen This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasesdiscontinues
stops
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temperature
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kėpt
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15 ° 
C even when it is freezing outside. In the parent comb, the central part of the comb, where eggs, larvae and nymphs are found
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatcoldclimateconditionwarmth
temperature
 during the breeding season remains constant at 33For the unit symbols for degree, minute, and second for plane angle no space is left between the numerical value and the unit symbol: "-34°" or add a missing unit symbol (e.g., "-34 °C").-34°-34 °C
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C, again facilitating that sufficient sugar is present. Don't put a space before the full stop.
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 They gather together in the middle of the nest to form an almost stationary cluster, in the center the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheatcoldclimateconditionwarmth
temperature
 will rarely drop below For the unit symbols for degree, minute, and second for plane angle no space is left between the numerical value and the unit symbol: "13°" or add a missing unit symbol (e.g., "13 °C").13°13 °C
13 ° 
C regardless of the outside weather. 