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The young queen bee, after adulthood, spends a few days in the hive, where the workers don't pay much attention to her until she is fertilized (we may note that it was previously thought that the bee was G

The young queen bee, after adulthood, spends a few days in the hive, where the workers don't pay much attention to her until she is fertilized (we may note that it was previously thought that the bee was G B3xw
The young queen bee, after adulthood, spends a few days in the hive, where the workers don't pay much attention to her until she is fertilized (we may note that it was previously thought that the bee was God only mate once; now we know that the sperm of a single male won't be enough to survive a monarch for many years and it actually mate with five to ten males). Later, the colony was seized with unusual excitement, in which the temperature could reach 40 ° C. When winter came, the males were 'slaughtered, or simply expelled from the female. cold quickly kills them. The queen stops laying and the bees form a mass that resembles a bunch of grapes, where the temperature is kėpt at 12–15 ° C even when it is freezing outside. In the parent comb, the central part of the comb, where eggs, larvae and nymphs are found, the temperature during the breeding season remains constant at 33-34 ° C, again facilitating that sufficient sugar is present. . They gather together in the middle of the nest to form an almost stationary cluster, in the center the temperature will rarely drop below 13 ° C regardless of the outside weather.
The young queen bee, after adulthood, spends a few days in the hive, where the workers don't pay much attention to her until she
is fertilized
(we may note that it was previously
thought
that the bee was God
only
mate once;
now
we know that the sperm of a single male won't be
enough
to survive a monarch for
many
years and it actually
mate
with five to ten males). Later, the colony
was seized
with unusual excitement, in which the
temperature
could reach
40 °
C. When winter came, the males were 'slaughtered, or
simply
expelled from the female.
cold
quickly
kills them. The queen
stops
laying and the bees form a mass that resembles a bunch of grapes, where the
temperature
is
kėpt
at 12–
15 °
C even when it is freezing outside. In the parent comb, the central part of the comb, where eggs, larvae and nymphs
are found
, the
temperature
during the breeding season remains constant at 33
-34 °
C, again facilitating that sufficient sugar is present.
.
They gather together in the middle of the nest to form an almost stationary cluster, in the center the
temperature
will rarely drop below
13 °
C regardless of the outside weather.
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IELTS essay The young queen bee, after adulthood, spends a few days in the hive, where the workers don't pay much attention to her until she is fertilized (we may note that it was previously thought that the bee was G

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