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The world’s natural resources, such as oil, forests and fresh water are being consumed at an ever-increasing rate. What are the dangers of the situation? What can be done to solve the problem?

The world’s natural resources, such as oil, forests and fresh water are being consumed at an ever-increasing rate. What are the dangers of the situation? What can be done to solve the problem? 0r11
It has been universally acknowledged that the problem of dramatic increase in the usage of global's natural resource is escalating at an alarming rate in crrent senario. This mainly can cause loss of biodiversity and economic crisis. There are plethora of solutions that can be used to overcome the problem of overusage of natural resource. Commmencing on the causes that occurs from this situation. The first reason is the death living beings on earth, is due to the lack of resource and this is the key factor infulencing this issue. In other words, human will suffocate to death as they do not get fresh air to breath as well as clean water to drink. Therefore this can lead to lots of diseases. The second contributing factor is the fall of economic. For instance, Saudi Arabiya is one of the largest oil supplier to the world and their 70% of the income comes from selling crued oil. If in case this resource gets dry, then the complete economy of the world drops. There are two effective solution to this issue. One way to curb this issue is by birth control. Furthermore, if introducing the law on how many childrens should the parents can have could be used to help reduce the usage of oil, forest and fresh water. By do this, the resource will never get dry and will have ample amount of time to regenerate the resources. Another method of dealing with natural resource which is overused is to have more supervision by the UNO, which should prevent the human activities such as extra supply of oil to other nation, cutting down the trees,
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universally
acknowledged that the problem of dramatic increase in the usage of global's natural
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resource
is escalating at an alarming rate in
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senario
. This
mainly
can cause loss of biodiversity and economic crisis. There are plethora of solutions that can be
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used
to overcome the problem of
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overusage
of natural resource.

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Commmencing
on the causes that occurs from this situation. The
first
reason is the death living beings on earth, is due to the lack of
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resource
and this is the key factor
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infulencing
this issue.
In other words
, human will suffocate to death as they do not
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get
fresh air to breath
as well
as clean water to drink.
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Therefore
this can lead to lots of diseases. The second contributing factor is the fall of economic.
For instance
, Saudi
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Arabiya
is one of the largest
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oil
supplier to the world and their 70% of the income
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comes
from selling
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crued
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oil
. If in case this
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resource
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gets
dry, then the complete economy of the world drops.

There are two effective solution to this issue. One way to curb this issue is by birth control.
Furthermore
, if introducing the law on how
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many
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childrens
should the parents can have could be
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used
to
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help
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reduce
the usage of
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oil
, forest and fresh water. By do this, the
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resource
will never
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get
dry and will have ample amount of time to regenerate the resources. Another method of dealing with natural
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resource
which
is overused
is to have more supervision by the UNO, which should
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prevent
the human activities such as extra supply of
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oil
to other nation, cutting down the trees,
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IELTS essay The world’s natural resources, such as oil, forests and fresh water are being consumed at an ever-increasing rate. What are the dangers of the situation? What can be done to solve the problem?

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