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The world is consuming natural resources faster than they can be renewed. Therefore it is important that products are made to last. Governments should discourage people from constantly buying more up to date or fashionable products. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

The world is consuming natural resources faster than they can be renewed. Therefore it is important that products are made to last. Governments should discourage people from constantly buying more up to date or fashionable products. pP9L
The world is using natural resources extensively than they could produce more. So that it is our responsibility to reduce the use of these at any cost. However, government can take control over people to stop acceessing them largely. In the following paragraphs I delve into this and explains why I agree the government should impose the rules over it. Natural resources are blessings for human life. These are on yhe earth without humankind. Now a days, people are exploits natural resources like water, energy, land and environment without any care. Human population is increased by year by year on earth. Hence the places are filled with lots of building and automobiles. Secondly, animals, birds and other wild life creatures are necessary for human existence. The earth is survived by the food chain system. Eradicating animals and to use their body parts for business is anhugr challenge in our existence. For example, people make bags, shoes and other leather products using by animals skin. Thirdly, the resources like water and energy are difficult to renewed without the presence of forest. Destroying the trees will danger in the climate system. Hence I believe government to give awareness to the people and bring strong rules against exploiting or over usage of the natural resources. To sumup, no human are alive without natural resources. If people are not control using it themselves government should play an important rule to cut down the usage of the resources.
The world is using
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natural
resources
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extensively
than they could produce more.
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So that
it is our responsibility to
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reduce
the
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use
of these at any cost.
However
,
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government
can take control over
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people
to
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stop
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acceessing
them
largely
. In the following paragraphs I delve into this and
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explains
why I
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agree
the
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government
should impose the
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rules
over it.

Natural resources are blessings for
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human
life. These are on
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yhe
earth without humankind.
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Now a days
,
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people
are exploits
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natural
resources like water, energy, land and environment without any care.
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Human
population
is increased
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by year by year
on earth.
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Hence
the places
are filled
with lots of building and automobiles.
Secondly
, animals, birds and other wild life creatures are necessary for
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human
existence. The earth
is survived
by the food chain system. Eradicating animals and to
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use
their body parts for business is
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anhugr
challenge in our existence.
For example
,
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people
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make
bags, shoes and other leather products using by animals skin.
Thirdly
, the resources like water and energy are difficult to renewed without the presence of forest. Destroying the trees will
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danger
in the climate system.
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Hence
I believe
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government
to give awareness to the
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people
and bring strong
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rules
against exploiting or over usage of the
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natural
resources. To
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sumup
, no
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human
are alive without
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natural
resources.
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If
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people
are not control using it themselves
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government
should play an
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important
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rule
to
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cut
down the usage of the resources.
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IELTS essay The world is consuming natural resources faster than they can be renewed. Therefore it is important that products are made to last. Governments should discourage people from constantly buying more up to date or fashionable products.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
243 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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