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The world is consuming natural resources faster than they can be renewed

The world is consuming natural resources faster than they can be renewed mo7q

The world is using natural resources extensively than they could produce more. So that it is our responsibility to reduce the use of these at any cost. However, government can take control over people to stop acceessing them largely. In the following paragraphs I delve into this and explains why I agree the government should impose the rules over it. Natural resources are blessings for human life. These are on yhe earth without humankind. Now a days, people are exploits natural resources like water, energy, land and environment without any care. Human population is increased by year by year on earth. Hence the places are filled with lots of building and automobiles.

The world is using natural resources Use "(extensively)" to make a comparison with this adjective.(extensively)
extensively
 than they could produce more. “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
So that
 it is our responsibility to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of these at any cost. However
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 can take control over This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
Possible spelling mistake found.accessing
acceessing
 them largely
. In the following paragraphs I delve into this and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interprets
explains
 why I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 should impose the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rules
 over it.

Natural resources are blessings for human life. These are on Possible spelling mistake found.thehesheCheAHEBHE
yhe
 earth without humankind. Did you mean "nowadays"?Nowadays
Now a days
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are exploits natural resources like water, energy, land and environment without any care. Human population is increased
This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only "by year".by year
by year by year
 on earth. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Hence,
Hence
 the places are filled
 with lots of building and automobiles. 