There is an upward trend in the usage of flight for individuals and economic purposes these day. Besides exceptional merits brought down by airline industry, it leaves a grave consequences which need being emphasized.
By flying, the gap between other countries will be narrowed. Time saving is as a result of taking a flight instead of other modes of transport. Moreover, creating a conditions for faster movement helps travellers go overseas easily, meaning that association between man in all the corners of the world will be forged. Another exclusive features of flight is carrying commodities. Not only hold a large amount of goods with high-speed do it also can remain products in a good conditions. This has been proved that delicate goods such as exotic flowers can be exported without damage.
Apart from the benefit, it has considerable drawbacks. The greatest concern is evironment contamination. Flying at high speed also means requiring more material and making a noise which affects resident living near airports or even develop epidemic diseases. No less important things is flying accident which takes a toll.
To conclusion, Flights which produce facilities are also a cause of concern problems. Therefore, the government should place a stringent taxes on regular travelers to save the planet for next generation.
There is an upward trend in the usage of
flight
for individuals and economic purposes
these day
.
Besides
exceptional merits brought down by airline industry, it
leaves
a grave
consequences
which need
being emphasized
.
By flying, the gap between other countries will
be narrowed
. Time saving is
as a result
of taking a
flight
instead
of other modes of transport.
Moreover
, creating
a conditions
for faster movement
helps
travellers
go overseas
easily
, meaning that association between
man
in all the corners of the world will
be forged
. Another exclusive features of
flight
is carrying commodities. Not
only
hold a large amount of
goods
with high-speed do it
also
can remain products in a
good
conditions. This has
been proved
that delicate
goods
such as exotic flowers can
be exported
without damage.
Apart from the benefit, it has considerable drawbacks. The greatest concern is
evironment
contamination. Flying at high speed
also
means requiring more material and making a noise which affects resident living near airports or even develop epidemic diseases. No less
important
things is flying accident which takes a toll.
To conclusion,
Flights
which produce facilities are
also
a cause of concern problems.
Therefore
, the
government
should place a stringent
taxes
on regular travelers to save the planet for
next
generation.
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