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The ways of improve learning foriegn languages

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Knowing foreign languages is opportunity to learn the world knowlege easily. Today, it is the most important features knowing two or more foreign languages. In fact, a lot of developed countries' people pay attention to learn any kind of different languages during their life time. But it has the problem of improve the learning of foreign languages. We can find different advice to solve this problem. Fortunately, there are a number of possible solutions which could lead to improve learning foreign languages. First of all, we could watch more films in the languages we are try to learn. Firstly, you can watch these films with subtitles, after that without subtitles. Secondly, we should listen to and sing songs in the languages. By this way we can learn to speak accurately and beautifully, because of the text of songs belong to literary poems. As a result our speech improve by using of literature. Furthemore, we should make more use of newapapers, magazines and other authentic materails such as broshures or journals. Consequently, we can understand that our speaking skill is improving day by day and we can also expand our horizond by reading authentic materials. The most effective way is recording our speech on the phone and listen the record, in this way we can find our mistakes too. In addition to, it would be a good idea to participate in student exchange programmes or to organise trips abroad. In conclusion, we should learn foreign languages by using of varity learning methods, but in my view the best way learning languages is living in the abroad with native speakers
Knowing
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foreign
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is opportunity to
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learn
the world
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knowlege
easily
.
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important
features knowing two or more
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foreign
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languages
. In fact,
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a lot of
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developed countries
'
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people
pay attention to
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learn
any kind of
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different
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languages
during their
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life time
.
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But
it has the problem of
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improve
the
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learning
of
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foreign
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languages
. We can find
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different
advice to solve this problem.
Fortunately
, there are a number of possible solutions which could lead to
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improve
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learning
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foreign
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languages
.
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First of all
, we could
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watch
more films in the
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languages
we are
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try
to
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learn
.
Firstly
, you can
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watch
these films with subtitles, after that without subtitles.

Secondly
, we should listen to and sing songs in the
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languages
. By this way we can
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learn
to speak
accurately
and
beautifully
,
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because
of the text of songs belong to literary poems.
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As
a result our speech
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improve
by using of literature.
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, we should
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make
more
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use
of
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newapapers
, magazines and other authentic
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materails
such as
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broshures
or journals.
Consequently
, we can understand that our speaking
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skill
is improving day by
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day and
we can
also
expand our
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horizond
by reading authentic materials. The most effective way is recording our speech on the phone and listen the record, in this way we can find our mistakes too.
In addition
to, it would be a
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good
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idea
to participate in student exchange
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programmes
or to
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organise
trips abroad.

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, we should
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learn
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foreign
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languages
by using of
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varity
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learning
methods,
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but
in my view the best way
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learning
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languages
is living in the abroad with native speakers

IELTS essay The ways of improve learning foriegn languages

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
267 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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