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The way to interact with information

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I think advertising has both pros and cons. One pro is that you can get much information with ads easily. For example, I often see fliers and go shopping because I want to buy something that is as cheap as possible. It is very useful for you to find bargains easily and seller can inform you of information that you do not know. So, sales will increase. Fliers has benefits for both sellers and buyers. Ad seems to be very useful. However, advertising has dangerous points. It is that seller may say only things that are convenient to them. In my experience, I have been deceived in the online shop only once. I saw the one ad that says " It is free! Now is your chance to buy. " I thought it is best deal ever and I bought this cosmetics. But, this was different than what I was expecting. It had hidden rules and I had to buy 5 times in a row. I was very shocked and I felt I should pay attentions to advertisings. From this example, it is shown that advertisements has cons and you should be careful when you see ads and buy goods. In short, advertisement has merits and demerits. Also, we need to know about these things and think hard whether it is really good value. It depends on how you are involved with it. Although sometimes it is good for you, it may be dangerous. To use it well, you ought to find out the essence.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 advertising has both pros and cons.

One pro is that you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 much information with ads easily
. For example
, I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 fliers and go shopping This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I want to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasebargainacquisitioninvestment
buy
 something that is
 as This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :economical
cheap
 as possible. It is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 useful for you to find bargains easily
 and seller can inform you of information that you do not know. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, sales will increase. Possible agreement error. You should probably use: "flier has".Flier has
Fliers has
 benefits for both sellers and buyers. Ad seems to be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 useful.

However
, advertising has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hazardousrisky
dangerous
 points. It is that seller may say This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 things that are convenient to them. In my experience, I have been deceived
 in the online shop This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 once. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 the one ad that says Don't put a space on both sides of a quote symbolapply
" 
It is free! This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
 is your chance to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasebargainacquisitioninvestment
buy
. Use a smart opening quote here: "“".“
"
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 it is best deal ever and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 this cosmetics. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
, this was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
Did you mean 'different "from"? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.from
than
 what I was expecting. It had hidden This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rules
 and I had to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasebargainacquisitioninvestment
buy
 5 times in a row. I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 shocked and I felt I should pay attentions to Possible spelling mistake found.advertising
advertisings
. From this example, it is shown
 that advertisements has cons and you should be careful when you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 ads and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasebargainacquisitioninvestment
buy
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
.

In short, advertisement has merits and demerits. Also
, we need to know about these things and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 whether it is really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 value. It depends on how you are involved
 with it. Although This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 for you, it may be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hazardousrisky
dangerous
. To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 it well, you ought to find out the essence. 