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The series of images highlight the stages of the production of tomato ketchup.

The series of images highlight the stages of the production of tomato ketchup. 85m2G

The tomatoes are first picked and put into baskets. Soon after, they are sorted according to quality, where the better tomatoes are separated from the worse. Following this, they are carried to the factory. There, the tomato skin is peeled off, the seeds are removed and the stalk is taken off the tomatoes, and they are put in a large container in order to be crushed. When they are finally crushed, sugar, vinegar and salt are added for taste. This tomato ketchup is boiled. Subsequently, it is cooled for two hours, and then the ketchup is loaded into bottles, which are labelled. The ketchup bottles undergo the quality checks in the factory. The better quality ketchup bottles are then packed into carton boxes and transported to supermarkets. The final stage of the process is marked by consumption with hamburger and fries.

The tomatoes are first
 picked and put into baskets. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
Soon
 after, they are sorted
 according to quality, where the better tomatoes are separated
 from the worse. Following this, they are carried
 to the factory. There, the tomato skin is peeled
 off, the seeds are removed
 and the stalk is taken
 off the tomatoes, and they are put
 in a large container in order to be crushed
. When they are finally
 crushed, sugar, vinegar and salt are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 for taste. This tomato You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgravyseasoningsaltdressingsaucerelish
ketchup
is boiled
. Subsequently
, it is cooled
 for two hours, and then the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgravyseasoningsaltdressingsaucerelish
ketchup
is loaded
 into bottles, which are labelled
. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgravyseasoningsaltdressingsaucerelish
ketchup
 bottles undergo the quality This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitors
checks
 in the factory. The better quality You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgravyseasoningsaltdressingsaucerelish
ketchup
 bottles are then packed into carton boxes and transported to supermarkets. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 final stage of the process is marked
 by consumption with hamburger and fries. 