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the way that students should be given their grades while they are working on the same project in groups

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It is critically important that teachers implement the best and effective method of teaching, especially, nowadays. In fact, one of the most debating subjects, in this case, is the way that students should be given their grades while they are working on the same project in groups. For this aim, some people think the same mark must be considered for the whole group and in contrast, others say that each of the children requires to be dedicated a specific and individual mark. Personally, I am inclined toward the first group’s idea and consequently, I will elaborate on my perspective in the following essay. First and foremost, when students are given equal grades while working together on the same topic, they are able to concentrate on their own tasks rather than other stuff which will lead to learning the lessons perfectly. Furthermore, in this situation not only their self-confidence does increase but also their other crucial skills improve and hence will lead to their future academic and social success. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. When I was a university student, I had a course in statistics which in, we were separated into groups. Our teacher emphasized teamwork and cooperation and she asked us to not think about our grades as all would be similar to each group. Considerably, all of the members just focus on their own responsibility and also learning the lesson thoroughly. As a matter of fact, the whole of the students worked enthusiastically on their projects and really understanding all the parts without any problem. Of course, it would not be possible without the method that our teacher implemented in the class at that time. Another equally important point to support my claim is that in this method students will face the least possible stress and anxiety which will be so beneficial for their mental and physical health. Therefore, they can enjoy every moment of attending class and in addition, also parents will be assured about the health situation of school and universities. For instance, one of my cousins had experienced a very bad feeling of stress about her previous school which makes her parents change their location totally. However, by participating in a new school with another method of teaching, fortunately, she relieves stress and now becomes a professional scientist with a pivotal role in her place of work. Certainly, it would not have happened if those circumstances had not been altered. In conclusion, I strongly feel that giving the same grades to students who jointly studying in a group is a perfect method. This is because it will help better concentration on lessons which lead to success and improvements in various aspects and also will relieve student’s stress which is popular among most of them.
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critically
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important
that teachers implement the best and effective
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method
of teaching,
especially
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in this case
, is the way that
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students
should be
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given
their
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grades
while they are working on the same project in
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groups
. For this aim,
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some
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people
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think
the same mark
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must
be considered
for the whole
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group
and
in contrast
, others say that each of the children requires to
be dedicated
a specific and individual mark.
Personally
, I
am inclined
toward the
first
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group’s
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idea
and
consequently
, I will elaborate on my perspective in the following essay.

First
and foremost, when
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students
are
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given
equal
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grades
while working together on the same topic, they are able to concentrate on their
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own
tasks
rather
than other stuff which will lead to learning the lessons
perfectly
.
Furthermore
, in this situation not
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only
their self-confidence does increase
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but
also
their other crucial
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skills
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improve
and
hence
will lead to their future academic and social success. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. When I was a university
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student
, I had a course in statistics which in, we
were separated
into
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
groups
. Our teacher emphasized teamwork and
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cooperation and
she asked us to not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
about our
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grades
as all would be similar to each
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group
.
Considerably
,
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all of the
members
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just
focus on their
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own
responsibility and
also
learning the lesson
thoroughly
. As a matter of fact, the whole of the
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students
worked
enthusiastically
on their projects and
really
understanding all the parts without any problem.
Of course
, it would not be possible without the
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method
that our teacher implemented in the
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class
at that time.

Another
equally
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important
point to support my claim is that in this
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method
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students
will face the least possible
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stress
and anxiety which will be
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so
beneficial for their mental and physical health.
Therefore
, they can enjoy every moment of attending
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
and
in addition
,
also
parents will
be assured
about the health situation of school and universities.
For instance
, one of my cousins had experienced a
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very
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bad
feeling of
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stress
about her previous school which
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makes
her parents
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change
their location
totally
.
However
, by participating in a new school with another
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method
of teaching,
fortunately
, she relieves
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stress
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
becomes a professional scientist with a pivotal role in her place of work.
Certainly
, it would not have happened if those circumstances had not
been altered
.

In conclusion
, I
strongly
feel that giving the same
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grades
to
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students
who
jointly
studying in a
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group
is a perfect
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method
. This is
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because
it will
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help
better concentration on lessons which lead to success and improvements in various aspects and
also
will relieve
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student’s
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stress
which is popular among most of them.
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IELTS essay the way that students should be given their grades while they are working on the same project in groups

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
463 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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