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The pictures illustrate how the Grange Park different between when it first opened in 1920 and now.

The pictures illustrate how the Grange Park different between when it first opened in 1920 and now. ebqaJ

The pictures illustrate how the Grange Park different between when it first opened in 1920 and now. Obviously, in 1920, the fountain was located in the middle of the park. Nowadays, there is the rose garden with 4 seats in 4 directions instead. First opened has the stage for musicians but present has not. Moreover, the glasshouse was rejected. In 1920, the stage for musicians was next to the fountain. There were four seats stayed between the both rose garden on the left corner and another one is approximately stayed at the bottom right corner. There were the entrances located at the north and south of the fountain and the glasshouse was beside the south entrance. At the upper right corner, there was a pond for water plants. Presently, the Grange Park’s built a new car park and have the entrance too. Increasing the children’s play area instead of the pond, the water feature in the bottom right, and a new Amphitheatre for concerts. Right hand next to the north entrance, there is a new café. Although, the park is changing, but there’s still stay near the Eldon Street.

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Park
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different
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now
. Obviously
, in 1920, the fountain was located
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park
. Nowadays, there is the rose garden with 4 seats in 4 directions instead
. First
 opened has the stage for musicians This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 present has not. Moreover
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In 1920, the stage for musicians was next
 to the fountain. There were four seats stayed between the both rose garden on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 corner and another one is approximately stayed at the bottom You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgoodlegalhonestappropriatelegitimateproper
right
 corner. There were the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhallwayporchdooropeningentrywayport
entrances
 located at the north and south of the fountain and the glasshouse was beside the south You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhallwayporchdooropeningentrywayport
entrance
. At the upper You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgoodlegalhonestappropriatelegitimateproper
right
 corner, there was a pond for water plants.

Presently
, the Grange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
Park’s
 built a new car You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 and have the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhallwayporchdooropeningentrywayport
entrance
 too. Increasing the children’s play area instead
 of the pond, the water feature in the bottom You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgoodlegalhonestappropriatelegitimateproper
right
, and a new Possible spelling mistake. 'Amphitheatre' is British English.Amphitheater
Amphitheatre
 for concerts. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgoodlegalhonestappropriatelegitimateproper
Right
 hand next
 to the north You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhallwayporchdooropeningentrywayport
entrance
, there is a new café. Although, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 is changing, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 there’s still
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stay
 near the Eldon Street. 