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It is seem that people are wasting a lot of food of various occupation

It is seem that people are wasting a lot of food of various occupation NypX0
Wasting of food is a very bad thing that people did in the various occupation. It is believe that in the verious function people waste a lot of food. The narrative ahead shall elucidate why people did this and it shall also highlights several measures that can be taken to elibilated these problem. Cominsing with wasting of food. Firstly it is a more options in food. This is because, to show their financial status people arrenged different types of food. Also maker can not maintain inferior quality and test of food because he afraid of the huge numbers of people. As a result, maker use the lowest quality in raw material of food.
Wasting of
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food
is a
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very
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bad
thing that
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people
did in the various occupation. It is
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believe
that in the
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verious
function
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people
waste
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a lot of
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food
. The narrative ahead shall elucidate why
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people
did this and it shall
also
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highlights
several measures that can
be taken
to
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elibilated
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these problem
.
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Cominsing
with wasting of
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food
.
Firstly
it is a more options in
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food
. This is
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because
, to
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show
their financial status
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people
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arrenged
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different
types of
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food
.
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Also
maker can not maintain inferior quality and
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test
of
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food
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because
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he afraid
of the huge numbers of
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people
.
As a result
, maker
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use
the lowest quality in raw material of
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food
.
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IELTS essay It is seem that people are wasting a lot of food of various occupation

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
113 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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